Reviewer: GrunAugen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/15 08:44 am Title: Chapter Four

This is a great story you're writing! I love the in-depth investigation into Brian and Nick's relationship, particularly at this crucial moment when they're not getting along. You've set it up really well for them to have to sort out their issues.. The characterizations are excellent; and i particularly like how you show each of them, in turns, in an unfavourable light, just as it always seems when you're not getting along with someone you know well and even love. I'm very curious to know where you'll take the plot next, but I hope Brian will soon at least try to tell Nick what he has planned. So intrigued. :D Please update again soon!

Author's Response: I like alternating views in stories because I feel like every story has multiple angles, and every person who experiences it sees everything differently. I felt like this story would be (excuse the pun but...) incomplete without being told from both their viewpoints. I don't think either character is particularly right in the way they're handling their argument, but both can be justified by hearing the situation from their respective angles. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope you keep reading! I really appreciate the feedback.