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Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/15 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Three

I thought that the interaction between Lauren and Brian in this chapter was quite cute! I laughed out loud at the whole "Nick Whisperer" thought!! I'm so excited to see where you go with this. Nick and Brian alone on a promotional tour ... Oh man. Good on Kevin for forcing the two of them together. They have to work things out - they need each other, they're both just too stubborn to admit it.

Reviewer: Star83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/15 03:50 pm Title: Prologue

I love this story and I am looking forward to read more.

Reviewer: addictedtobsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/15 08:24 am Title: Chapter Three

I'm enjoying this so far and looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Three

Oye vey. This shall be interesting. Kevin getting hit with chili cheese fries though - hilarious! Why are these moments not recorded? Lol. Yeah it's fiction, but oh that would be so damn funny to see!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. His mother shall meet my pointy sticks shortly.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Two

Roflmao. Oh Nick. You really need to control your temper and quit jumping down Brian's throat every two damn seconds.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. If he were to leave I'd bawl.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Two

Roflmao. Oh Nick. You really need to control your temper and quit jumping down Brian's throat every two damn seconds.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. If he were to leave I'd bawl.

Author's Response: I think Nick's about to learn that lesson. The hard way.

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Two

Ha! I could totally see Nick saying "good" about Leighanne not coming with them on tour. If I was in Nick's position, I would probably say the same thing ... is that horrible?? LOL On a completely unrelated note, the awkwardness of Nick and Brian's interaction really got to me. It felt real and that's what made it so hard for me to read. Why can't things just go back to the way that they were before!?!?!

Author's Response: I hate awkward conversations like that, where you can feel there's stuff not being said and you aren't sure what to say to make it move along. I have those frequently with my sister. I channeled that frustration into their conversation in the restaurant. I'm glad it came off as awkwardly as I was trying to make it feel! haha

Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 08:13 pm Title: Chapter One

First off, I wanted to say that I'm LOVING the fact that so many people are writing about "the fight scene". I'm interested to see where you take this as a Nick and Brian bromance story is right up my alley! I enjoyed the fact that you kept showing the situation from both of their perspectives. I think that you nailed their emotions and I totally agree with AJ; what exactly marked the end of Frick and Frack? It's like one day they were super close and the next day they just weren't. The notion of Brian taking a break from the group scares the crap out of me! He's my favourite and the reason why I became a fan in the first place. I honestly don't know if I would continue to love them as much as I do now if Brian were to leave ...

Author's Response: I think Brian is a lot more central to the group than a lot of fans realize. Brian was my favorite when I first became a fan, too, and often competes with Nick for favorite-ness, I'm not gonna lie. lol... There's a lot of things from the movie that inspired this story, but it's been a story that I've been meaning to write for awhile now anyway, it just needed the nudge the movie gave it to make it come into fruition. I've had several versions of this story floating around my ideas file for quite a while now. There were just details in the movie that happened to stitch the story together in a way that made it work for right now. I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Jujube Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 05:05 pm Title: Chapter One

Aww I wish they would of talked more in the bathroom. And I wanna know the reason for them not being frick and frack anymore!

Author's Response: Things shall unravel - whether Nick wants to think about Whys or not, the Whys are on their way. At least in the fiction world. lol

Reviewer: Jujube Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 05:04 pm Title: Prologue

This break my heart! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 08:25 am Title: Chapter One

The thought of Brian leaving terrifies me in a way. He's my favourite - he was why I even liked them/took notice of them to begin with. It was his voice, his face, his eyes that made me a fan. I think if he were to leave that would be it for BSB. It was different with Kevin, because he was background a lot (love him plenty, but that's what he was), but Brian was (sometimes still is) leads and without him it would be weird. He's like the comedic relief (though they're all funny) that constantly makes you laugh. Sure I noticed he doesn't sing as much, but it never bothered me because he'd make me laugh. The man could stand there, smile and wave and do nothing else and I'd be happy - lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Author's Response: I started out a Brian girl, too. I've always been a Frick & Frack girl. Brian's heart was a very current issue in my family when I became a fan because my dad actually had an open heart surgery in the 90s as well so I knew what it meant and how serious it was, where a lot of the fans didn't understand it at the time. I was also raised in a very Christian family and the fact that Brian was a good Kentucky Church boy was basically one of the only reasons I was allowed to listen to BSB! I've always appreciated his fun and comic relief as well. I wouldn't ever want him to quit the group either. Luckily, this is purely fan fiction, lol. ;)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 08:15 am Title: Chapter One

Everyone seems to be inspired by that fight scene, third since the movie came out! I'm keen to see where your interpretation will take you as it's already looking interesting and different.

Author's Response: This is going to end up more inspired by Brian's vocal issue in general, the fight just really added the spice to it, lol. There were a lot of things that were in the movie that are kind of coming together to create the backdrop for this story. I think a lot of the stories I've seen anyway took place at the time of the fight, too, where this one's actually set present time / in fictional near future. I have some interesting ideas to cover in this... You know I like writing more psychologically/emotionally involved stories. I hope it does stay interesting and different. :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/15 07:47 am Title: Prologue

Oh hey, something to read whilst I eat midnight eggs!