Date: 02/17/15 08:44 pm Title: Part I: Chapter 1
Awww everything was so perfect ... Too perfect. Haha! I know that there's gonna be some drama - it wouldn't be a good romance without drama. :p I love your descriptions. It makes me feel like I'm there in the moment with the characters without being overwhelming or taking away from the plot. Great start!
Date: 02/17/15 08:50 am Title: Part I: Chapter 1
Hi, it's such a nice surprise to see this sequel! I'm really glad that, after the prologue, you've switched back to where the last story left off... otherwise I'd feel like we missed out on so much. It's really nicely written, and you do a great job of making an 'ordinary' day interesting... mainly with the great characterizations and interaction between Meg and Brian. :) I'll be very interested to see where you take us from here. Please write more soon!
