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Reviewer: KeepThisSecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 09:55 pm Title: Part II

Awwwww I love Kevin! I think you totally nailed his mannerisms; kinda awkward, kinda still, and totally emotional. LOVE HIM! Also, the bit with Baylee was super cute. :P

Reviewer: GrunAugen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 09:16 am Title: Part II

I almost hated this chapter at first because there's no Brian... but then I was reminded of why Baylee is right, and Meg is amazing. I think this chapter was in fact best for showing just how far Meg's relationship with Baylee has come, as his stepmom, so it was actually best that Brian not be there when he has had to act as mediator, I presume.
But my favourite line is Kevin's: "You got us the old Brian back", and I would have to agree. :)

Author's Response: :) There is going to be more backstory to Meg's relationship with her new stepson. Keep reading. :) Thanks for your faithful reviewing!