Date: 03/03/16 06:04 am Title: Part IV: Chapter 11 / Brian
Sorry this is so late.. RL took over for awhile so I haven't even had time to read, much less review!
I love the fact that you're bringing in chapters from Brian's pov. This was definitely something that he had to do himself, and a second-hand account (if that could even exist) wouldn't do it justice. Loved how much of a hard-ass you portray Connie to be and how afraid Brian is. But the best part is definitely at the end, when Brian gets his blessing. And the words he says before is is bestowed.