Date: 04/24/15 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Backcountry Moonshine Brewer
I'm kinda having the feel that whoever is behind all of this must be someone inside their circle. Otherwise it doesn't make sense how easy and freely accidents are happening, especially now that the FBI is constantly with them.
Second. Thank Howie for adressing the Brian's skinny thing. Now he's looking much healthier (and hotter) but there was a time last year when I want to make a petition "feed a Brian" LOL Give that man something to eat, instead than kust wondering "oh, he's getting skinny..." NO! XD This man can't be trusted with taking care of himself. LOL
Plus, I love the hint about a freindship between Brian and Rochelle.
And I love commenting (but I think you've already deduced it lol), especially if it's a story that I really like and always look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I agree that there was definitely a time when Brian was looking way too skinny. He's been looking much better recently ... not that it's really possible for the man to look bad. Haha! I think I've mentioned it before, but I really do enjoy reading your reviews. I like that you take the time to go into so much detail. Have you thought about doing the summer reading challenge this year?? You would be a great participant because you give such detailed feedback. I did it for the first time last year and it was a great experience. It's also a good way to get more people to read your writing ... people who maybe wouldn't give your story a chance otherwise. Anyways, if you're interested, Mare has started a thread about it on the discussion boards. :)
