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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/16 03:09 am Title: Chapter 26: The Loser

Thank you, Howie! Finally, some suggests Ashley could be involved! I can't believe the others aren't even willing to consider that idea. Howie's jealousy of Brian, though... wow! So much drama; I love it!

Author's Response: Yay, Howie!! Sometimes I forget about Howie, so I tried hard to include him in this story. I tried to give him some actual feelings so that he was more than just a "background" "plot advancer".

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/15 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 26: The Loser

Dear Howie,
You can try the solo career thing but, I hate to break it down for you, no one will really care about it.
Dear Howie,
it's funny that you think that Brian, Nick and Aj are acting like little kids when, in reality, the only one acting like one is you.
Dear Howie,
do you really believe that you would ever win over Brian? No, like, seriously? lol Frick and Frack are meant to be and you're so gonna be that sorry for the way you acted towards Brian when shit will happen. (And, knowing Brian, he will totally forgive you because he's blaming himself for you feeling hurt and blah.)

Now, it would be funny if Howie is right. But... I don't know, I can't really see Ashely as the unsub. More like working with the unsub, otherwise she wouldn't hesitate when Nick asked her to upload the chapters.

Also, I freaking loved the whole description of how much Brian and Nick loved each other. *_* I just sighed and awed.

Author's Response: Dear Mamogirl, you're awesome!! This review seriously made me lol! I love how you're so passionate about the whole Brian and Nick rekindling their relationship thing. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. :)

Reviewer: bjnkha9192 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/15 02:52 am Title: Chapter 26: The Loser

part of me feels bad for Howie the other part is like ha! in your face Howie! no one can get in the middle of that Frick and Frack love LOL

Author's Response: I love how everyone who has been commenting is 100% team Frick and Frack!! HAHA Poor Howie never stood a chance. I mean, he seems like a perfectly nice guy and all, but he doesn't have anything on Brian (at least not as far as Nick is concerned).

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/15 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 26: The Loser

The name of the chapter is the loser.... I knew it was coming. Sorry Howie.

They have an advantage though, they know what's coming.... They just have to be on guard and not be total dumb dumbs and not go off on their own. Howie loves Nick so much, you can jump in front of the bullet then, LOL. We don't even know where or the severity of the gun shot yet. Could be a flesh wound.

Even if Brian doesn't have the support of Howie, at least he has a.j. And Nick. Yay. I'm sure he has Kevin too, afterall, they are cousins. Howie could've sat on the floor too and they'd be family. But no, too much pride and blinded by jealousy. I hope he changes his tune before its too late. Tragedy does bring people together. I fear that's the only way he will open his eyes.

I love your updates. The best! So looking forward to the next. The story is progressing well.

Author's Response: Poor Howie. Nobody seems to have any sympathy for him at this point. Although, in all fairness, he's kinda brought it on himself with the way that he's been acting. He needs to get over his jealousy and focus on not being a dumb dumb and avoiding the un-sub. The next update is almost ready to go, so it shouldn't be too much longer of a wait.