Date: 07/21/16 03:23 am Title: Chapter 28: What Had We Done?
Ahh, this chapter was so sad - and so suspenseful!! I love A-Rok. I'm not totally surprised they changed up what was going to happen; obviously, they knew Nick would be wearing a bullet-proof vest so they shot Brian instead. Ahh, must keep reading!!
Author's Response: I love me a good A-Rok moment! The two of them are just so different that it's so cute when they're together. :)
Date: 08/15/15 02:19 am Title: Chapter 28: What Had We Done?
Holy crap! What the *insert obscenities here*?!?!?! I saw this coming and it STILL didn't take away from the sting of it actually happening. It's stuff like this that absolutely makes me HATE cliffhangers. You've gotta update ASAP.
Author's Response: YAY!! I'm glad that this chapter got to you!! Wait? Is that wrong?? HAHA I will hopefully be updating soon. I'm just finishing off the next chapter. I didn't want to keep you all waiting too long to see if Brian makes it or not. :P Anyways, thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. I really appreciate the feedback and it motivates me to make more time for writing in my hectic schedule. I hope you stick with the story until the end. :)
Date: 08/14/15 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 28: What Had We Done?
Dun dun dun! Ooh, oh my! You tricked us. I love a good twist though.
Please don't kill him, I'm not ready for that. Who shot Brian?
This unsub sure was trying to maim a lot of people. Seems like at least.
Oh btw, thanks, my car is now fixed. I have good friends, so was able to get a ride.
Is there going to be a major shoot out between our un-sub and the f.b.i.? He or she doesn't seem like the type that would be caught alive.
Oh and did you pick the song breath cuz its very fitting... "I can't breathe" get it? Hehe
Author's Response: Well, I HAD to trick you!! HAHA It's so much more fun that way! Well, at least it's more fun for me. I'm not sure how all of my readers felt about it. :P You will have to wait and see what happens to the un-sub. Dun dun dun!! LOL OMG! I died at your "Breathe" comment!! Too funny!! I didn't pick it for that reason, but can I say that I did?? I LOVE IT! Also, I'm glad that you were able to get your car fixed and that someone came to get you.
Date: 08/14/15 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 28: What Had We Done?
You did it!
You freaking did it!
You shot Brian!
Is it bad that I actually exclaimed "yes"? Oops? lol
I mean, I'm devastated (nope) and I do hope that you won't kill him (but a little torture between life and death is welcomed) but... Finally someone who isn't me hurt Brian!
I knew that the unsub would change his scheme and do something that no one was waiting. But that probably means also that he knew that they are coming closer and closer and I do hope that he made a little mistake that would allow FBI to catch him.
Now. Dear Howie. I'm waiting. Oh, I'm so waiting for you to realize how childish and idiot and dick you have been. (Especially cause Brian didn't steal your best friend cause Nick has always been his. XD)
Author's Response: Yes, I did it!! Finally!! LOL I'm happy (if not a tad disturbed) that you're so excited that I finally made something bad happen to Brian. HAHA Seriously though, I love that you're so into the idea of someone torturing Brian for a change. Usually it's Nick who goes through all the crap. Not this time!! *evil laugh*
