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Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/15 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 32: I Hear You

I'm really sad.
I really loved this story, it has been so long since I actually longed for new chapters and kept checking my mail. So it's sad not to have something to look forward and read.

That said, I loved this chapter. Now we have a new nickname for Nick: Brian's whisperer lol It was such an adorable picture him basically coaching Brian to wake up and not to listen to the negative stuff.

I love that, in the end, it came out what really makes Brian special and so loved: his strength. Even bullets can't managed to take him down.

Thank you, again, for this story that is surely going to my favorites. And I hope to see something new from you as well. Because I already know it's going to be a Brian's one. lol

Author's Response: Awwwww *big hugs* It makes me so happy to know that you were looking forward to the updates. I was also sad to see the story come to an end, but it was time. It had run its course. Anyways, I really enjoyed all of the feedback that you gave me while I was working on this story. You have no idea how much it meant to me!! I always looked forward to your reviews. :D I am most definitely working on another story, and, you're right, it will be a Brian one. Well, it will probably be more like a Frick and Frack story. HAHA! Am I predictable or what?? I hope to hear from you again once I get around to writing and posting my next piece of fiction. Thanks again!! xxx

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/15 09:28 pm Title: Epilogue

Ha! See, I knew you wouldn't kill Brian! Brian's perspective of trying to respond and wake up was good. I enjoyed that perspective. You also had me laughing in this last chapter with the boys leaving the reviews on Ashley's newest story. A shame the story has to come to an end. Good job! :)

Author's Response: I didn't have the heart to kill him. I just couldn't bring myself to do it!! Oh well ... maybe next time ... HAHA Thanks for your comments throughout the updating process. I really enjoyed reading them and I hope that you'll be around to check out my next story (once I actually get around to writing it). :)

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/15 05:42 am Title: Chapter 31: Last Chances

Oh...my..god...all the feels about killed me in this chapter. So so heartbreaking! I think what got to me the most was Kevin breaking down and sobbing. There's just something about that guy doing that that really tears my heart to shreds. *hugs Kevin* Darn you and your cliffhangers though! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: There is something about the idea of Kevin crying that gets to me too. I think it's because he always comes across as so strong and stoic. I mean, if Kevin is crying then you know that the situation is BAD. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter. You will find out what happens to Brian in the next chapter. I'm not going to make you wait any longer. :P

Reviewer: bjnkha9192 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/15 02:06 am Title: Chapter 1: Online Erotica

who keeps chopping onions?! knock it off!

Author's Response: It's not me. I swear. *Hides another massive bag of onions* :) Glad that I'm still making you cry!! LOL

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/15 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 31: Last Chances

Oh gosh.

I think I've started really sobbing with Aj and his "Without you, I'll be just A, Mr. A". Then I had to read the chapter twice because of the tears. ;__;
From Kevin and his feeling guilty (and there aren't a lot of stories who focus on the relationship between the two cousins), Aj and Nick knowing that they would be lost without Brian to remind them that they can always be better and happy, to Howie who finally realized the jerk he had been.
Brian's role in the group is always underestimated: he may not going public or does big gestures but he's the silent heart that keeps the group together.

And the last line... Brian Thomas Littrell, proving doctors and odds wrong since he was a child. *.*

Thank you so much for this story.

Author's Response: Well, I'm impressed that you took the time to read the chapter twice. Sorry for making you cry ... well, I'm not really sorry ... I'm kind of glad that I was able to evoke some emotion. HAHA Now, comes the big question: Will Brian make it?? You will find out in the next chapter (I promise)!! :D

Reviewer: freedomwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/15 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Online Erotica

Is it strange that I'm still freaking out about the death warning you put with this story?

This last chapter left little cracks in my cold heart. Although I was one of the people rooting for Brian to get hurt, it would be so devastating if he really did die. I'm glad all the boys at least were there to say goodbye, may it come that far.


Wouldn't someone have called his wife though?

Author's Response: Errrrr I'm sure that SOMEONE has called Leighanne. LOL! However, the shooting has only just occurred so that is why she hasn`t arrived yet. Honestly, I just didn't want to write her in, so that's why I've made everything happen rather quickly. It's too much work to write in all of the wives and all of their interactions!! HAHA Seriously, I think that most people don't want to read about the wives anyways. :P Anyways, thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review!! I love hearing what people are thinking about the story.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/15 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 30: Truth, Lies, and Revenge

Good grief, Howie. You really want to win this one, do you? You really want to battle with Charlie and win the title for most hated character in the whole story. Brian is dying and what he is doing? Still playing the victim "Nick doesn't listen to me..." and blah blah blah.
I wanna kick him so bad. XD
And it's better if I don't say what I want to do to Charlie. But I bet that I'm sharing the same thoughts of Kevin so I'll let the evil eyebrows do the job while I wait patiently, actually, impatiently, for you to not kill Brian. XD

Ps: It would be amazing a scene like "Oh, Brian and Nick. Do you remember that time when you told the world that you are having a secret love a... ehm, never mind. XD

Author's Response: I love that you still have your hate on for poor Howie. Can't you see that he's struggling?? LOL You seriously better not run into Howie until this story is over because I'm afraid of what the news headlines will be: "BSB fan takes out Howie Dorough for acts he committed in an online work of fiction ..." HAHAHAHA!! As for Brian ... will I kill him or won't I?? I actually haven't decided myself yet. :D

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/15 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 30: Truth, Lies, and Revenge

Y'know, you just kinda wanna strangle Ashley even though it's more like she got dealt a bad hand by being involved with Charles. It's a crappy situation over all. And the guys are stuck in limbo, waiting to hear an update on Brian's condition. Hell, us as readers are all stuck in limbo waiting for an update on his condition. LOL. Great update! Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: I know how you feel about Ashley. I kinda want to strangle her and she's my character!! LOL I'm already working on the next chapter, and I hope to have it up soon. Maybe I will let you know if Brian lives in the next update ... maybe. :P Thanks for the continued feedback! I really appreciate reading your thoughts!

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/15 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 29: Did You See Him?

So much emotional turmoil. My favorite kind of chapter.

So, the un-subs end game was to rid the world of Brian because he thinks Brian ruined his career/life? Creepy!

Will we get to see an interrogation? I'm curious as to what Charles will say.i know he's a crazy nut but I love criminal minds and how they get inside of the mind of the suspects. They see the world so different.


I hope Brian makes it. Two thumbs up for the update!

Author's Response: It is pretty creepy. Charles has some issues. Poor guy. Although, he was cheated out of a lot of money ... and fame ... and thousands of adoring fans ... I suppose that I would be pretty bitter about that too. However, I would probably stop short of trying to kill the person who I thought was responsible. LOL

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/15 07:50 am Title: Chapter 29: Did You See Him?

I knew it! I knew it! lol I thought that the unsub could be one of the two guys who were in the group before Kevin and Brian came. But I couldn't and didn't remember their name (as in "Brian wasn't there so I couldn't give a care about it) so I wasn't sure about that idea. Glad it turned out to be right! lol My years of being a Criminal Minds and Sherlock fans aren't wasted! lol

Oh Nick. ç_ç
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You broke my heart. I first read the chapter while I was having dinner and I had to force myself not to cry. The most heartbreaking thing is that I can totally see that happening in real life: I can totally see Nick (or Brian) not being able to survive and go on if the other is gone.
And Aj... gosh, I don't think that even him could survive, not after how close they got over the years. ç_ç

*returns to the crying ball waiting to know if Brian would make it or not*

Ps: whenever I see Howie on Twitter, my first thought is "You hate Brian! You were mean with him!" LOL See? That's how much involved I am with this story. lol*

Author's Response: HAHA - Your years of watching crime-related TV have most definitely paid off!! I suppose as long as you don't actually say hateful things to Howie on Twitter then it's okay for you to think that he's a horrible person!! LOL It's crazy how the lines between fan fic and real life can blur so easily. I wonder if anyone has ever made a mistake and been like: "Hey, Nick, remember when you were a zombie ... oh wait, nevermind!!" BAHAHAHAHA

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/15 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 29: Did You See Him?

Gah, I jumped on this as soon as I saw you had updated! I've seriously been waiting for this since I got caught up. But gosh darnit, we still don't know if Brian's okay! Shame shame shame! LOL. Update soon and keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: I couldn't end the suspense too soon. What would be the fun in that?? LOL I'm so happy that you were excited for the update! I hope to have the next one up soon. :)

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/15 02:19 am Title: Chapter 28: What Had We Done?

Holy crap! What the *insert obscenities here*?!?!?! I saw this coming and it STILL didn't take away from the sting of it actually happening. It's stuff like this that absolutely makes me HATE cliffhangers. You've gotta update ASAP.

Author's Response: YAY!! I'm glad that this chapter got to you!! Wait? Is that wrong?? HAHA I will hopefully be updating soon. I'm just finishing off the next chapter. I didn't want to keep you all waiting too long to see if Brian makes it or not. :P Anyways, thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. I really appreciate the feedback and it motivates me to make more time for writing in my hectic schedule. I hope you stick with the story until the end. :)

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/15 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 28: What Had We Done?

Dun dun dun! Ooh, oh my! You tricked us. I love a good twist though.

Please don't kill him, I'm not ready for that. Who shot Brian?

This unsub sure was trying to maim a lot of people. Seems like at least.

Oh btw, thanks, my car is now fixed. I have good friends, so was able to get a ride.

Is there going to be a major shoot out between our un-sub and the f.b.i.? He or she doesn't seem like the type that would be caught alive.

Oh and did you pick the song breath cuz its very fitting... "I can't breathe" get it? Hehe

Author's Response: Well, I HAD to trick you!! HAHA It's so much more fun that way! Well, at least it's more fun for me. I'm not sure how all of my readers felt about it. :P You will have to wait and see what happens to the un-sub. Dun dun dun!! LOL OMG! I died at your "Breathe" comment!! Too funny!! I didn't pick it for that reason, but can I say that I did?? I LOVE IT! Also, I'm glad that you were able to get your car fixed and that someone came to get you.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/15 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 28: What Had We Done?

You did it!
You freaking did it!
You shot Brian!
Is it bad that I actually exclaimed "yes"? Oops? lol
I mean, I'm devastated (nope) and I do hope that you won't kill him (but a little torture between life and death is welcomed) but... Finally someone who isn't me hurt Brian!

I knew that the unsub would change his scheme and do something that no one was waiting. But that probably means also that he knew that they are coming closer and closer and I do hope that he made a little mistake that would allow FBI to catch him.

Now. Dear Howie. I'm waiting. Oh, I'm so waiting for you to realize how childish and idiot and dick you have been. (Especially cause Brian didn't steal your best friend cause Nick has always been his. XD)

Author's Response: Yes, I did it!! Finally!! LOL I'm happy (if not a tad disturbed) that you're so excited that I finally made something bad happen to Brian. HAHA Seriously though, I love that you're so into the idea of someone torturing Brian for a change. Usually it's Nick who goes through all the crap. Not this time!! *evil laugh*

Reviewer: bjnkha9192 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/15 02:05 am Title: Chapter 27: Bad Connection

oooooooh! I think I know who 'A' is lol

Author's Response: Do you??? You will need to tell me if you're right once everything is all wrapped up and the mystery is revealed. HAHA