Date: 03/31/15 07:24 am Title: Chapter 11 Emerald Lace
First apologise for lateness in responding. I'm playing catch up on all my fav stories at the mo due to being busy recently.
Secondly wow on this story. Really hope that Nick can get better now that he is in the right place. He needs to open up and tell everyone what happened when he was 15. Think a lot of things stem from there.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you! sorry for the long awaited update...been so busy and cramming in a new story while its in my head..i will take the time today to update if possible..thank you for reading :)
Date: 03/09/15 03:53 pm Title: Prologue
I am enjoying this more and more I'm glad you update regularly. Waiting for next update
Date: 02/25/15 01:35 am Title: Prologue
I love how you update quickly I am still loving this story.can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you :) I am trying so hard to update and still making it interesting!
Date: 02/24/15 01:47 am Title: Chapter 5 Some Slips of Paradise
I am really enjoying this story can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thank you! I am happy to hear your enjoying this, stay tuned for more, its gets intense and more interesting
Date: 02/22/15 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 The Battle of Elsewhere
Oh poor Nick - how horrible for him. I'm glad Kevin confronted him and got him to show his arms. Sounds like he is going to need all the support he can get.
Author's Response: yea :( he went through so much and is going to go through a lot more, I can tell you this someone he never met will though.stayed tuned and thank you for the review..if only i can get the darn format right lol
Date: 02/22/15 07:38 am Title: Prologue
If I could make a suggestion, you may want to change your formatting a bit.
Big blocks of text are hard to read and there's large blank spaces between them, it's not very inviting to the reader.
If need be, take a look at some of the top reviewed stories to get a good idea of how to lay things out in a way that's easier on the eyes. :)
Author's Response: yea, I am not sure how to do that though, i tried fixing it multiple times but nothing changed