Date: 03/09/15 03:53 pm Title: Prologue
I am enjoying this more and more I'm glad you update regularly. Waiting for next update
Date: 02/25/15 01:35 am Title: Prologue
I love how you update quickly I am still loving this story.can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you :) I am trying so hard to update and still making it interesting!
Date: 02/22/15 07:38 am Title: Prologue
If I could make a suggestion, you may want to change your formatting a bit.
Big blocks of text are hard to read and there's large blank spaces between them, it's not very inviting to the reader.
If need be, take a look at some of the top reviewed stories to get a good idea of how to lay things out in a way that's easier on the eyes. :)
Author's Response: yea, I am not sure how to do that though, i tried fixing it multiple times but nothing changed