Date: 03/29/16 10:20 pm Title: 1. My Love
Can't wait for chapter 32 ! :)
Author's Response: lemme go ahead and update then XD
Date: 12/04/15 09:40 pm Title: 1. My Love
Wow not was expecting that. That only wasn't hard to read but heartbreaking like others said. Nick sitting cradling g Brian I his arms rocking hi back and forth saying he's sorry, I had tears running downmy face. The thought of Howie punching Brian in the chest to get him brating again oh my gosh. Nick arguing with the paremetics to let them help him and save him tears. Then the last brains body jumping c a use they shocked him the others watching it all had me in tears outstanding story and writer can't wait to see where it goes from here. I am betting all this will bring the closer together then ever.
Author's Response: Glad I was able to keep it a surprise. I must admit I was nearly crying as well when I wrote it; there's just something about picturing the whole thing that kinda gets to you. It's good to know it's fiction.
Date: 11/28/15 02:59 am Title: 1. My Love
I can't wait for the next chapter! Your story is so realistic, I can easily imagine it really happened. Good work ! :)
Date: 11/17/15 03:54 pm Title: 1. My Love
Love this story.sad it's true to a point, but love how real you write. Love the drama at the end can't wait to see where you r taking this story. Awesome job.
Date: 07/11/15 03:34 am Title: 1. My Love
It's dark, it's light, it's insightful.
A letter to leighanne? I'm glad he has his rock though, she had been very supportive through all this.
It's scary to think about, and I know the subject is touchy, but it helps one realize how inspiring Brian truly is. I know I personally would not be as strong as he is. Shows the depth of his character.
Is this a one shot? Would be lovely to see this continued.
Author's Response: It's really weird to leave a one-shot hanging like this, wouldn't it? :)
Anyway, I scoured one of the forums on BSB and read the huge response to Brian's problems. Some(read: most) of it made me very angry and confused at the apparent insensitivity people seem to have towards the situation and the inability of placing yourself in his shoes for even a moment. I'm trying to do that with this story, and try to stay as close to his character as I can, what I can perceive from his character, anyway. We tend to ignore the gigantic emotional and mental toll this must have taken on Brian over the years. He's supposed to act rational and responsible at every single moment in his life?
I took a writer's class once and was told that in order to show character of your character, you must make terrible things happen to them, and show your readers what they're made of, so to speak. The sad part of this story, is that I do not need to make bad things happen, as they are already happening in real life.
