Date: 07/15/15 06:42 am Title: 3. My Fears
Hi, I just wanted to let you know how much I like this story. It's great that you're addressing actual issues and extrapolating from what we know from the documentary and other interviews to weave the plot.. like tying up all of the hints and glimpses we have gotten over the past few years. Your characterization seems great and I like your focus on Brian's pov! I think thinks must have been this traumatic for him in RL. I wonder what you'll incorporate next... his tea deliveries to Nick, maybe? Looking forward to the next update and thanks!
Author's Response: That's exactly my intention XD I'm very glad you like it. I try to stay as close to original events as possible to try and find out how this whole thing might have affected him and the other members.
Date: 07/13/15 04:55 am Title: 3. My Fears
I do appreciate AJ being there while Brian is having his panic attack, those are no fun at all. And glad to see AJ's compassion. I like how you have written AJ, I have never met the guy, but it seems real.
I hate that Brian has been going through this, doesn't seem fair. But I keep the faith.
So, we have seen AJ be supportive and positive, while Brian seems hopeless. It's hard telling someone yes, everything is going to be alright when all they see is no, no, no, it won't work out.
Wonderful update, waiting.... Slightly, patient for the next one.
