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Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/15 09:10 pm Title: 8. My Nightmare

While the "fight" scene is my favorite, the end of it is one of those scenes I can't watch anymore. Especially for Brian's eyes: you have Nick that totally believes in him, that want to make him believing again and Brian just sit there with those dead eyes... (and you wish it was just a story you are writing.)

I love this level of drama... oops? lol A sane dose of Briangst is always good. U.U But I loved that it's Nick the one following him. #MyBabies

Author's Response: I get what you're saying about that scene, but I loved how real and raw it was. It was inspiring to see how this terrible situation did not only affect Brian, but the rest of the band as well. They're desperate search for a solution to a problem that's relatively new to them is what made the documentary real for me. And yes, whenever I try to think too hard about it, I do wish it was just a story, but sadly it's not. I do hope the added suspense and drama to this 'story' is still fictional though. It's truly astonishing how much pressure a soul can take.

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/15 07:02 pm Title: 8. My Nightmare

Holy cliffhanger! I love drama in fics, not real life. So keep the drama coming.
I am glad someone went looking for Brian though.
Nick busting down the door, reminds me of Kevin and AJ. But the circumstances are totally different here.

I just wonder if you will have Brian realize that the rest of the guys are not enemies. Or will he brush this off and snap at them for trying to help. I know sometimes it's easier to just push people away than to let them in.

Author's Response: yay, I was hoping you would see that parallel with Kevin and AJ there! It worked! Thanks for your review, it really helps me in continuing this story ^^