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Reviewer: GrunAugen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/15 11:00 am Title: 12. The Relative

Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I'm really glad you're continuing with this story recently. It's great that you've taken on the challenge of this recent (and ongoing) subject matter of Brian's voice. I'm enjoying seeing the speculative back-story on the various performances and events that we know of or could guess probably occurred; seeing it all woven into one storyline is really satisfying. Of course, it's good to know that this is your own take on things, so just about anything could happen behind the scenes... Looking forward to learning more about the foreshadowed events / Kevin's realization. I hope we get some more chapters from Brians pov since he's so hard to get through to at this point. Great job and keep writing!

Author's Response: Love hearing that you still enjoy the story. Yeah, I do think I've added enough additional drama to make it more fictional, otherwise it might get boring (or maybe not, who knows what really goes on there anyway?) I try to take the most realistic route, but it tends to overdramatize a little as it gets further into the story.

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/15 12:37 pm Title: 12. The Relative

Add mood swings to the mix. Scary. You never know what you are gonna get.

What do you do in that situation? An intervention could go either way. Need to bring a doctor in,I would think.

I guess we will see what the boys do. I know as a fan, I could sometimes see this flash of disappointment you are talking about. But there were great crowds that would cheer Brian on, and you can see how grateful he is. I think it helps.

I think I mentioned rock bottom before... It's coming.

Great update!

Author's Response: Yep, I can totally imagine Brian was not the most fun or easy person to work with in that period. Indeed we will have to see what rock bottom looks like, and if the boys even let it go that far.

Reviewer: Brians_Fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/15 02:38 am Title: 12. The Relative

Oh boy sounds like they have a much deeper problem then they first thought. Gratis chapter. Can't wait for more