Date: 11/29/15 08:32 pm Title: 14. The Friend
I have to say that I really liked this chapter but found it (or the end of it) weirder than the last one. But I guess that was the idea--the mystery of what Brian is doing in the bathroom. Vocal exercises? The medication (or whatever the pills are) and the strange smell issue are getting to me. Please update! Although I'm sure it will just get more convoluted and mysterious before you let us in on what's really going on.
Really appreciated the Frick'n Frack hug at the end, though! :)
Author's Response: I do have a tendency to drag stuff out. And yes, the weirdness at the end was totally intentional.
Date: 11/28/15 05:06 pm Title: 14. The Friend
Aw, a happy chapter. Yes, I call this a happy chappy. The hug at the end makes my heart swell with happiness.
It was good for the people around Brian... But Brian just may be getting better at hiding things. Seems that way. Don't think the happiness will last long.
What are the pills for? Ah! You do have me wondering what will happen next. As always, keeping me on my toes. A wonderful read.
Author's Response: yes, let's call this a happy chappy, shall we? Or maybe not.
I'm assuming the pills are for his throat, what else?
