Date: 12/04/15 08:05 am Title: 16. My Chances
I'm glad that you continued this flashback a little further... I think it was key to showing how regaining his voice just a little gave Brian that ray of hope he didn't have before and how his demeanour and attitude towards his voice turned a complete 180. I loved the scene with the mirror where he's so surprised that he almost can't feel how happy he is, only register the emotions shown to him by his reflection. It was also a good chapter for showing the human facets of all characters involved, both good and bad. I hope there are more pancakes in the future!
Date: 12/01/15 03:47 am Title: 16. My Chances
Now I am wondering, if the coldness is due to the weight loss/mal-nourishment. An underlying illness perhaps.
I can see the litrells eating a lot of pancakes haha. Random thought! I recently saw a tweet from Leighanne about birthday pancakes for Baylee. But who can blame them? Yum!
So if things are looking up... Soon, Brian shall fall on his face? I know, I will find out soon.
