Date: 12/04/15 08:19 am Title: 18. The Liar
Wow, the foreshadowing is really getting to me! But I have to suspect some kind of medication use at least, which only lasts so long and would leave Brian drained again afterwards. But it would make sense that he wants to show a high level of energy if he's worried about being not needed, whereas it was good to see that AJ realizes that they just need Brian to be there and do his part. It's interesting that all of the guys have at different times noticed these moments of weakness or stumbling but have yet to do anything, which I guess is the point of this chapter. Anyway, overanalysis again. ;) Really anticipating the next installment!
Date: 12/03/15 05:36 pm Title: 18. The Liar
Gasp! You and the cliffhangers! I'm dying with anticipation. The build up is great. What's the inevitable? What happens to Brian?
Author's Response: oh brace yourself, because it'll get really bad, really fast.
