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Reviewer: angeb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/17 06:32 pm Title: A Leader of Men

I was so excited to see that you had updated your story. Its so heartbreaking. Poor Brian, I hope its not too late for him or Leighanne or NIck or Bonnie.

You have written this so well, so touching and so realistic. I absolutely love this story.

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: angeb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/17 11:19 am Title: A Hopeless Flight

I started reading the first story last week and this one this week. I am absolutely in love with this. Its dark and angsty and I hurt for Brian, Nick, Leighanne and yes Bonnie too. Great job!!!

Reviewer: marzi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/16 10:10 pm Title: A Familiar Face

I'm so glad you decided to do a sequel to this story. I wondered how Brian and Nick would deal with what happened. I thought in the ending of the last story that Nick would be helping more with Brian's recovery but I guess he has his own guilt he has to work through and maybe why he's keeping his distance. I would love to know why Bonnie doesn't trust him lol. Great story hope to see an update soon

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much for reading and reviewing this story! I really appreciate it. The situation is going to have to get a lot worse before it gets better ;)

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/16 05:19 pm Title: 2. A Lesson in Obedience

OK, so I just went back and re-read killing me softly, love the angst and suspense. Great story, and this sequel is great as well.

Love Bonnie's point of view. She is going through the motions with Brian as her owner, but love her for sure. Just a little scared for her though. Brian seems... Snappable. Not a word, but for my sake, it is.

I know Brian is trying, and from what he has been through, I can't blame him for being so jumpy. I don't know if I would go anywhere without security for the rest of my life. It's hard to get back to normal after coming back from hell. Is there a normal after that?

Well, I hope you continue.

Author's Response: Brian is definitely the one you should be afraid for (and maybe of) He's pretty much a ticking time bomb, but let's hope that the consequences are overseeable. It's the question if 'normal' is still a thing Brian knows how to handle.

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