Date: 01/13/17 05:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay, there are the boys! I always love the way you write them - the funny banter, but also the complexity of their relationships with each other. Poor Nick really is clueless, lol. Can't wait to find out what happened to Howie!
Author's Response: Ugh, Nick! LOL I can totally see him being a bit clueless about a lot of things when it comes to being married and raising children. Luckily, Odin seems to be turning out just fine. However, I'm pretty sure that's mostly due to the fact that Lauren probably has a good handle on what's going on. HAHA I love writing the boys when they're all together. :)
Date: 06/20/16 11:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Very cute chapter!
Probably because Howie's gone and shit is about to hit the fan. DUN DUN DUN... (Love it)
Author's Response: I figured that I needed to start out with a chapter that was light and fluffy to balance out what is about to come. Originally, I had started with the chapter that explains what has happened to Howie, but then I changed my mind. That being said, I should have the Howie chapter up soon. :P
Date: 06/19/16 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Something will never change from one story to another: how Nick always managed to get me angry at me for how he treats Brian.
Seriously Nick?
Do you really believe that after giving birth Lauren will be all "yeah! Let's make sex immediately!"? LOL It will be a miracle if she doesn't force you to do a vasectomy! LOL
And I love how Aj was all about "What matters is that you stay after the kid is born" *looks at Nick's schedule* Poor Lauren! lol And poor Odin (just for the name! XD)
*cough* As always.... who cares about Howie? *cough*
Author's Response: Ahhhhh you can't be angry at Nick already!! HAHA If you are, then you are going to positively HATE poor Nick by the end of this story. I'm still undecided in terms of how I feel about the name "Odin". I don't hate it, but I don't love it either. I give them points for being original, but I don't know how it's gonna work out for the kid when he goes to school. :P Ummmmm poor Howie!! Why does nobody care about him?? LOL
Date: 06/17/16 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Your dialogue is great, the banter between the guys make me laugh. Even though someone is getting a bit touchy. I love all of the teasing. That is what you are SUPPOSED to do your little brother. Trust me, I know, I am a big sister and it's in the manual.
I am worried about Howie's tardiness. Will he show? Has he been taken already? Or just a missed flight, overlay or something of the sort? Excited to seeeeee. Great work!
Author's Response: I'm also a big sister and I totally agree with your logic that it is our job as the older sibling to tease the younger ones!! That's just how life works; sorry, Nick!! I'm glad that you enjoyed the banter and that it seemed believable. I was trying to begin with a "calm before the storm" type of situation. :P
