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Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/17 05:08 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow! I knew as soon as that car pulled up that it wasn't really a taxi. Still scary! I was worried one of them was going to get shot. I love how you put AJ in that predicament where he had to make a split-second decision whether to go back and try to help Nick or keep running and escape. I think he was right to keep running; at least now he can go to the police and describe what he witnessed, if he actually makes it that far. Before all of that happened, I loved the comic relief in this chapter. Nick's line about not fitting into Brian's hobbit-sized pants cracked me up. I'm really enjoying this!

Author's Response: Yay! So happy that you're getting more into the plot as it moves along. I was actually undecided about what AJ was going to do right up until the minute that I got to that point in the chapter. Which, I suppose, is fitting seeing as how AJ comes across as being very indecisive about a lot of things in real life. I like that you noticed the funny bits. I always try to throw some humour in to keep things interesting. :D

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/16 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 6

First off, how dare Nick call Brian ugly! Lol

Secondly, yay to all of the action. Another one bites the dust! Heh. Guess Brian and Kevin will be finding out what happened to Howie soon, that's assuming that AJ will get to the apartment.

At least a couple of guys will be reunited. There's some comfort in numbers. At least people have to be secretly wishing that they are not alone in these types of situations.

The police are already involved, I wonder if AJ will get to the others before the abductors do. So much suspense! Great work, look forward to the next update. Always!

Author's Response: LOL!! Clearly, Nick needs glasses because Brian is handsome!! (More handsome than Nick IMO.) If I were in this situation, I would definitely be wishing that I wasn't alone. So, you're right in the sense that Howie will probably be pretty happy to see Nick. Nick, on the other hand, probably won't be so happy to join Howie (although he may be relieved to discover that he is still very much alive). Two down and three to go! Will AJ make it to the apartment? Will Kevin and Brian actually think to look for Nick and AJ if they don't show up? So many questions ... :P

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/16 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh Nick... your act as a hero of letting Aj go doesn't save you from your being mean to Brian. U.U You deserve being kidnapped and put with your "precious" Howie. U.U

*What do I have to do with this guy? LOL He never learns!*

And, after my nonsense commentary, great chapter as always. I totally dig your decision to use the third person this time: I think it's the best because it gives you the opportunity to show all characther's pov without having to start new chapters. It gives to the reader the whole scene from different eyes so good choice!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying the third person narrative. To be honest, I'm kind of struggling to write in the third person as I much prefer first person. However, I felt that this story would be easier to tell from multiple perspectives at once, so I really appreciate the fact that you agree with me. Also, I DID warn you that you may not be too happy with Nick. HAHA :P