Date: 02/02/17 05:13 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh man, Kevin, you walked right into that! I wonder if AJ will make it to Brian's to warn him before either of them get caught next. I wouldn't mind if it was AJ and Brian trying to save the other three cause I love A-Rok together, but I have a feeling, based on the beginning of the story, that all five of them will end up getting abducted.
Author's Response: I love me some A-Rok!! Some of the time, I even enjoy the AJ/Brian pairing more than the Nick/Brian pairing. I think it's because AJ and Brian are so polar opposite; makes it interesting to write about them kind of balancing each other out. Kevin = dumb dumb in this chapter!! (How often does that happen?!) You will just have to keep reading to find out what happened ... :)
Date: 07/08/16 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Bottom line of this chapter should be: "Everyone gets angry at Brian because they truly believe that he should be loyal to them for different reasons. Aka: everyone wants Brian." LOL
Another line would be: "The moment when Brian proves to be more responsable and mature than his older cousin who, like an idiot, gets himself kidnapped. At least now he knows that Nick and Howie are alright? XD"
Now... the question is: will Aj be able to get to Brian's house? Will the kidnappers make a stop at Brian's house and kidnap him too, so Nick will be happy? *puts sarcasm here*
Only the next chapter will tell us! lol
Author's Response: HA! I knew that you would have a comment about the Kevin/Brian disagreement. Am I a good guesser or what?? LOL I bet Kevin is regretting his decision to not listen to his little cousin's warnings, but what's done is done and now he has to figure out how to get himself out of a bad situation. Will AJ be the hero and make it to Brian/the police before he gets caught? What will happen to Brian now that he's all alone? You will have to wait and see!! :D
Date: 07/07/16 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aaaah! Not Kevin too! And to have left Brian on such a sour note. The nerves of it all is making everyone cranky and they are going at each other instead of being an united front. Never a good thing.
I'm happy to read that AJ is not in the "taxi" .... At least yet, right? Unless AJ is going to be the hero of the story. Maybe he will get to a phone to call the cops. Or maybe he will get to Brian's place in the midst of another abduction. Maybe he will escape again. I don't know but I am definitively excited to find out.
Once again so many scenarios, so many what ifs, so many questions. Will they be united and what are these votes that you have teased us about? Are any of the guys safe from the abductors? Are they planning on killing them all since they don't care that their identity is exposed? Why is Brian and Nick on such hostile ground? Can they put their differences aside in order to get out of their situation, that's assuming all will be captured at some point. I have so many more questions. But I'm sure you are thinking, all in due time! He he. Oh you authors, such teases.... I love it!!!
Thanks for the update, it's nice to get away from the scariness of the real world and read a little fiction.
Author's Response: I LOVE that you have so many questions at this point!! It's nice reading your review and being able to see this story from a reader's perspective. It's nice to know that I've been able to generate some uncertainly and some suspense. That being said, you do know that I'm not going to answer any of your questions, right?? LOL You will just have to keep reading to find out. :) In reference to your real world comment, I woke up this morning to the news coming out of Dallas and all I could do was shake my head. All of this violence; so senseless and so unnecessary.
