Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/16 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 15

Carl has a conscious, they can work with that. These guys are bound to screw up. That's what I am counting on because if the guys are arguing over nick, then they definitely need the bad guys to mess up!

Jealousy does not belong in this mix. Omg, calm down Howie. Sup with that? Haha. I don't mind a little tackling from Brian, but he needs to use that on the true enemy not Howie! He is going to need to save his strength because if he is leading in the poll, he will need it. There are so many cultures that punish liars in different ways. I'm just wondering which one you will pick. Well, Brian is a bible thumper, possibly something biblical?

Oh and don't worry, we are all a bit sporadic. Life yo. Hehe.

Author's Response: The boys do seem to be in a bad place at the moment; turning on each other and fighting - so sad. Brian better watch himself and not make any enemies among the other guys.Especially, if Brian ends up being picked to play the next "game", he's going to need all of the support that he can get. Poor guy. It's nice to know that you're still so invested in this story. I was away all weekend, and it was great to come home and read your review. Hopefully, I will have some time to write the next installment this week. :)