Date: 06/14/17 10:51 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh shit, who just got shot?! I love that the boys tried to fight back; too bad it didn't work. Must read on!
Date: 09/20/16 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ugh! A cliffy! A great cliffhanger though. I am a sucker for great cliffies, even though I suffer throughout the wait.
I am glad they tried to stand up to the bad guys, too bad they underestimated their strength. Can't wait to find out who was shot and where. What will happen to Brian? Will the cops ever find them?
Aaaah, so anxious and excited to find out everything! Great work. And now back to work for me, boo. Just wanted to drop a few lines before I headed back.
Author's Response: I felt it was time to start leaving you all with some suspense. I haven't even started on the next chapter yet, so you may be suffering for a while to find out the answers to all of your questions. Sorry!! :P I must agree with your "boo" to work comment. LOL I'm actually just about to begin work for the day, but I felt that I would take a few minutes to respond to your lovely review. I seriously wish that someone would just pay me to write all day long!
Date: 09/20/16 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
Well... Nick's idea wasn't that bad, there was a little bit of truth since numbers were on their side. But of course, since it had been Nick's idea, it would had gone bad.
Really bad.
Hi Brian! I know that you are the one being hurt. lol #MoreBrianHurt #EveryoneLovesTorturingBrian
You're not gonna make us wait long for the next chapter, right? XD Right? XD
Author's Response: Poor Nick; he really did try to do the right thing. It just blew up in his gorgeous face. *sigh* In all fairness, the rest of the guys should have realized that good things don't happen when they listen to Nick. HAHA I will try not to make you wait too long for the next chapter. However, I haven't even started writing it yet, so I can make no definitive promises. :P
