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Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/16 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 8

So that's the reason why Brian isn't using Twitter anymore! LOL
Sorry, I had to make that joke because the ending is quite scaring. And exciting? XD (Bad Cinzia! lol)
Why have I the feeling that pressure isn't going to have an amicable relationship with Brian and his problems? Will the forced situation of being captived (because we all know that Brian and Aj are soon going to join the other three) together help me not hate too much Nick? XD

So many questions....!

Author's Response: HAHA!! So, I kind of love the fact that you have no confidence in AJ and Brian to save the day!! Maybe they will be the heroes and be able to avoid getting captured ... it could happen ... maybe ... Yes, I have heard that Brian has been pretty absent from the world of Twitter lately. Although, I don't do Twitter so it makes no difference to me! :P

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/16 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh man, reunited and it feels so gooood. Lol, at least temporarily! Omg, are you going to leave us like that for the weekend?? Is that the tweet that everyone saw in the prologue? Maybe?

They better stop standing around and call the police! That's why they should have their bodyguards around. Especially when they are working. I guess they thought that snow would stop crazy fans, they didn't think of psychos though.

What is the end game for these abductors? Money for sure right? One guy sounds a bit more loose in the head though. But that's how it usually goes right? One desperate guy and one completely out of his mind? The nut can usually convince the desperate to do anything. Very persuasive.

Well, I'm sure things are about to get a lot more hectic for our two remaining guys. Where you lead us, I am sure to follow.

Author's Response: Of course I'm going to leave you hanging all weekend!! What kind of writer would I be if I didn't leave you in suspense for at least a couple of days?? HAHA Bodyguards probably would be have been helpful in this situation, but they were only getting together to record a few songs. What could go wrong, right?? I'm sure that's what they were thinking; we're totally safe and want to keep our recording sessions low-key so there's no need to bother Mike and the rest of the boys. If they make it out this alive, I'm sure that they will keep their security around 24/7 for the rest of their lives!! :P One of the kidnappers is definitely a bit more nutty than the other. You've definitely got that right! It's a good thing that you are prepared to follow me as all of your questions will be answered ... eventually. Love reading all of your speculation!! :D

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/16 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 7

Bottom line of this chapter should be: "Everyone gets angry at Brian because they truly believe that he should be loyal to them for different reasons. Aka: everyone wants Brian." LOL

Another line would be: "The moment when Brian proves to be more responsable and mature than his older cousin who, like an idiot, gets himself kidnapped. At least now he knows that Nick and Howie are alright? XD"

Now... the question is: will Aj be able to get to Brian's house? Will the kidnappers make a stop at Brian's house and kidnap him too, so Nick will be happy? *puts sarcasm here*

Only the next chapter will tell us! lol

Author's Response: HA! I knew that you would have a comment about the Kevin/Brian disagreement. Am I a good guesser or what?? LOL I bet Kevin is regretting his decision to not listen to his little cousin's warnings, but what's done is done and now he has to figure out how to get himself out of a bad situation. Will AJ be the hero and make it to Brian/the police before he gets caught? What will happen to Brian now that he's all alone? You will have to wait and see!! :D

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/16 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 7

Aaaah! Not Kevin too! And to have left Brian on such a sour note. The nerves of it all is making everyone cranky and they are going at each other instead of being an united front. Never a good thing.

I'm happy to read that AJ is not in the "taxi" .... At least yet, right? Unless AJ is going to be the hero of the story. Maybe he will get to a phone to call the cops. Or maybe he will get to Brian's place in the midst of another abduction. Maybe he will escape again. I don't know but I am definitively excited to find out.

Once again so many scenarios, so many what ifs, so many questions. Will they be united and what are these votes that you have teased us about? Are any of the guys safe from the abductors? Are they planning on killing them all since they don't care that their identity is exposed? Why is Brian and Nick on such hostile ground? Can they put their differences aside in order to get out of their situation, that's assuming all will be captured at some point. I have so many more questions. But I'm sure you are thinking, all in due time! He he. Oh you authors, such teases.... I love it!!!

Thanks for the update, it's nice to get away from the scariness of the real world and read a little fiction.

Author's Response: I LOVE that you have so many questions at this point!! It's nice reading your review and being able to see this story from a reader's perspective. It's nice to know that I've been able to generate some uncertainly and some suspense. That being said, you do know that I'm not going to answer any of your questions, right?? LOL You will just have to keep reading to find out. :) In reference to your real world comment, I woke up this morning to the news coming out of Dallas and all I could do was shake my head. All of this violence; so senseless and so unnecessary.

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/16 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 6

First off, how dare Nick call Brian ugly! Lol

Secondly, yay to all of the action. Another one bites the dust! Heh. Guess Brian and Kevin will be finding out what happened to Howie soon, that's assuming that AJ will get to the apartment.

At least a couple of guys will be reunited. There's some comfort in numbers. At least people have to be secretly wishing that they are not alone in these types of situations.

The police are already involved, I wonder if AJ will get to the others before the abductors do. So much suspense! Great work, look forward to the next update. Always!

Author's Response: LOL!! Clearly, Nick needs glasses because Brian is handsome!! (More handsome than Nick IMO.) If I were in this situation, I would definitely be wishing that I wasn't alone. So, you're right in the sense that Howie will probably be pretty happy to see Nick. Nick, on the other hand, probably won't be so happy to join Howie (although he may be relieved to discover that he is still very much alive). Two down and three to go! Will AJ make it to the apartment? Will Kevin and Brian actually think to look for Nick and AJ if they don't show up? So many questions ... :P

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/16 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh Nick... your act as a hero of letting Aj go doesn't save you from your being mean to Brian. U.U You deserve being kidnapped and put with your "precious" Howie. U.U

*What do I have to do with this guy? LOL He never learns!*

And, after my nonsense commentary, great chapter as always. I totally dig your decision to use the third person this time: I think it's the best because it gives you the opportunity to show all characther's pov without having to start new chapters. It gives to the reader the whole scene from different eyes so good choice!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying the third person narrative. To be honest, I'm kind of struggling to write in the third person as I much prefer first person. However, I felt that this story would be easier to tell from multiple perspectives at once, so I really appreciate the fact that you agree with me. Also, I DID warn you that you may not be too happy with Nick. HAHA :P

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/16 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yay!
I made it through another Howie's chapter! *cheers and applauses*

You know what I'm liking about those chapters? No, not Howie (sorry XD) but your style and your descriptions. I love descriptions! *_*

Author's Response: *claps* Yay!! I'm so proud of you for actually reading another chapter dedicated just to Howie. You can breathe easy in the sense that there will not be another solo Howie chapter for a good while. LOL However, this chapter was necessary to advance the plot and somebody out there has to care about what's happening to Howie, right?? Thanks for the compliments about my style! It means a lot!! :D

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/16 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 5

Poor Howie. He really is in over his head. Fighting would just leave him bloody and bruised and who wants to be achy on top of emotionally distressed? I wonder if/when all the guys are taken, who would be the one to try and fight back. You can't have five healthy guys vs two guys. Even though the abductors have guns, can't shoot all five guys at a time. Although two may have to bite the bullet for the rest, bring out the straws. Lol

This is great and I look forward to the rest. Hope Howie doesn't stress pass out. Now he knows more guys may be joining him. Uh oh!

Author's Response: Poor Howie, indeed!! I thought about having him try to fight back, but then I changed my mind as I decided that he's just too passive of a person to try and escape. Now, all he can do is wait to find out his fate (and the fate of the others). Out of all the guys, I can see Kevin trying to fight back and possibly Brian. Kevin would just want to be in control of the situation, and Brian would probably think that he's invincible and just go for it (like a dumb-dumb). HAHA AJ would want to fight, but would realize that it's a better decision not to and I'm still undecided about young Nickolas. :P

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/16 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

I have an Iphone for years and I have never used Siri. LOL It scares me but I laughed so hard when Brian used it to find Howie's car. That's something that Nick would do too.

*pats Howie's head* Poor one, no one cared about him all day. One day, someone would write a story about how Howie got crazy and killed the other four so the attention would be all about him. lol

As for your past reply, Nick kinda gave you an advice when he posted a picture of he and Brian in the studio with the hashtag #Frickandfrackareback
If Nick says so.... LOL

Author's Response: I love Siri! LOL I enlist her services quite frequently. :) I did see that picture that Nick posted and I immediately thought of you. I knew that you would appreciate it. FYI, I'm kinda loving your suggestion about Howie losing his s**t and attacking the other guys just to get some attention. Perhaps, I should take it and turn it into my next story??

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/16 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Uh oh, shit just got real for two more members of the group. And just like men, they would wait so long to start searching for Howie and making phone calls.

Poor Leigh, stuck at home with two children while her man is missing.

Come on Kentucky cousins to the rescue, lol.

Where in the world is Howie and will he be okay? Oh the suspense!!

Great update, excited for the next one.

Author's Response: Typical male response from team Kentucky in this chapter - Hmmmm, Howie didn't show up today ... maybe we should do something about it?! *face palm* If one of my friends didn't show up to a scheduled event, I'm pretty sure I wouldn't wait hours upon hours to call her husband. Just sayin'!! HAHA I think if Howie is placing his faith in Brian and Kevin to save him, he's in trouble!! TYFTR :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/16 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh... poor Howie. lol But, hey, he got himself a chapter where he was the main character! LOL

Me and Howie... a love story of how to forget about him. lol

Can't wait to read how the guys will discover it. *eyes Nick* I'm actually a little scared about what you replied me about me hating Nick at the end of the story. I don't want to hate him! LOL He just needs to stay with Brian. U.U

Author's Response: Aren't you proud of me? I wrote a whole Howie chapter and I didn't bore you to tears! I think that's a pretty big accomplishment. HAHA Don't worry, the other boys will re-appear in the next chapter. In regards to Nick and Brian, I cannot promise that I will keep them together. I haven't decided yet. *ducks for cover*

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/16 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 3

I don't know what I would do if I was in Howie's situation. But I am fairly sure, my mouth would get me shot. I would like to make it as hard as possible for my abductors. You will have to drag my dead carcass across the snow!

Exciting chapter. I love the sing along in the car BTW. Howie seems the type that would let his guards down when he is alone.

I now wonder how the others will find out and when.

Author's Response: LOL! I don't quite know what I would do in Howie's position either. Although, I'm pretty sure that I would have just stayed quiet and played along like he did. I'm kind of a wimp that way. :P FYI, I was totally singing along to that Selena song on my way to work, so that's why I made Howie do it.

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/16 11:14 am Title: Chapter 2

Very cute chapter!

Probably because Howie's gone and shit is about to hit the fan. DUN DUN DUN... (Love it)

Author's Response: I figured that I needed to start out with a chapter that was light and fluffy to balance out what is about to come. Originally, I had started with the chapter that explains what has happened to Howie, but then I changed my mind. That being said, I should have the Howie chapter up soon. :P

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/16 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Something will never change from one story to another: how Nick always managed to get me angry at me for how he treats Brian.
Seriously Nick?
Do you really believe that after giving birth Lauren will be all "yeah! Let's make sex immediately!"? LOL It will be a miracle if she doesn't force you to do a vasectomy! LOL
And I love how Aj was all about "What matters is that you stay after the kid is born" *looks at Nick's schedule* Poor Lauren! lol And poor Odin (just for the name! XD)
*cough* As always.... who cares about Howie? *cough*

Author's Response: Ahhhhh you can't be angry at Nick already!! HAHA If you are, then you are going to positively HATE poor Nick by the end of this story. I'm still undecided in terms of how I feel about the name "Odin". I don't hate it, but I don't love it either. I give them points for being original, but I don't know how it's gonna work out for the kid when he goes to school. :P Ummmmm poor Howie!! Why does nobody care about him?? LOL

Reviewer: mandelyn78753 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/16 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

Your dialogue is great, the banter between the guys make me laugh. Even though someone is getting a bit touchy. I love all of the teasing. That is what you are SUPPOSED to do your little brother. Trust me, I know, I am a big sister and it's in the manual.

I am worried about Howie's tardiness. Will he show? Has he been taken already? Or just a missed flight, overlay or something of the sort? Excited to seeeeee. Great work!

Author's Response: I'm also a big sister and I totally agree with your logic that it is our job as the older sibling to tease the younger ones!! That's just how life works; sorry, Nick!! I'm glad that you enjoyed the banter and that it seemed believable. I was trying to begin with a "calm before the storm" type of situation. :P