Date: 05/14/17 11:00 pm Title: Last Night You Saved My Life (With Your Love)
That was intense. I'm not super into Kevin/Nick but I think you made this believable. They walked the line of having the brotherly relationship but with underlying feelings there. You portrayed it well! I felt so bad for Nick, the beginning bit with his frustration was so well written. Great work x
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm glad it was believable. Also happy that the frustration came across like I wanted it to. I wanted to make it realistic. Thanks!