Date: 07/22/17 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like how you've set this up with the tension in the group. Nick being upset over his friendship with Brian and Brian feeling bad about it too, but not really doing too much about it. Also liked the scene with Kevin lecturing Nick about smoking lol. Intrigued to see where his will go now that Russell's working for them! Great start on this Tracy.
Author's Response: I feel like this is stuff they would actually do. I often feel like Brian does want to patch things up but they're both too stubborn. As for Kevin, I seem to have him lecture Nick a lot lol. Thanks for the review
Date: 06/20/17 08:51 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad you're rebooting this story! I don't remember all the details of the original, but I remember liking the old-school suspense feel that it had, and that is definitely still the case here. Great start!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're happy to see this story being posted. I have four more chapters written already, working on a fifth. Just been on a roll. Interestingly, I haven't deleted the original. It's still on here so I can reference it. I'm glad it still has a great old school suspense feel cause that's what I was going for. Thanks for the review!
