Date: 07/11/17 07:24 pm Title: Shattered
Sweet story. I still can't believe Leslie is gone either. And his Dad...that shook me a little as my Dad is the same age. I love how he turned to Kevin. Howie would understand too but Kevin is like the silent rock in the group.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, Lenni!
Date: 07/07/17 01:43 pm Title: Shattered
Tracy! This was so sad! I liked the bit at the beginning where Aaron had to be the one to tell Nick. Also this " Aaron was not as good at hiding his emotions as I was." understatement of the year, lol. His conversation with Kevin was so sweet, I could see something like that really happening. Great work :)
Author's Response: Yeah I can tell Aaron doesn't know how to hide his emotions like Nick does. I feel that's the same in real life. I loved the conversation as well. I think it's something Kevin definitely would say. Thanks!
Date: 07/07/17 10:15 am Title: Shattered
Aww, this put tears in my eyes! Great idea for a short story. I think you captured Nick's complicated feelings for his father perfectly, and I loved the scene of Kevin and him talking.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment. I wrote most of this on my flight to Vegas and I finished it while on vacation. I wanted it to be emotional and I'm glad it came across. Thank you so much!