Date: 08/02/17 05:12 pm Title: Always And A Day
Short and sweet. Really like this Cinzia - and honestly the only reason I will accept for Nick ditching the after party LOL. I liked the imagery here with space, that was neat and of course quite reflective of Nick's personality. I also really liked this line - “You know… - Nick’s voice vibrated against Brian’s throat, his lips brushed against that beard that was extremely hard not to love and be attracted to. - … I promised I would be at the after party.” I thought you painted the picture perfectly here! Oh, I also liked the note about the mess of blonde hair, though two different colours. Can't get enough of that blonde, lol. Great work! x
Author's Response: Thank you so, so, so, so much! <3 When I first heard about them being the only ones missing from the AP, I was like "I'm not even surprised." lol I'm usually not a fan of really short stories, I prefer long descriptions and such, but this didn't need nothing else. Just Nick and his "I should be somewhere but I prefer staying here". And I don't blame him. LOL Thank you so much again!