Date: 08/11/17 10:55 am Title: Always And A Day
Loved this even more reading it here than on Whatsapp lol glad our conversation inspired this story and I'm so happy you're writing again. Loved the images and descriptions.
Date: 08/02/17 06:12 pm Title: Always And A Day
Short and sweet. Really like this Cinzia - and honestly the only reason I will accept for Nick ditching the after party LOL. I liked the imagery here with space, that was neat and of course quite reflective of Nick's personality. I also really liked this line - “You know… - Nick’s voice vibrated against Brian’s throat, his lips brushed against that beard that was extremely hard not to love and be attracted to. - … I promised I would be at the after party.” I thought you painted the picture perfectly here! Oh, I also liked the note about the mess of blonde hair, though two different colours. Can't get enough of that blonde, lol. Great work! x
Author's Response: Thank you so, so, so, so much! <3
When I first heard about them being the only ones missing from the AP, I was like "I'm not even surprised." lol
I'm usually not a fan of really short stories, I prefer long descriptions and such, but this didn't need nothing else.
Just Nick and his "I should be somewhere but I prefer staying here".
And I don't blame him. LOL
Thank you so much again!
Date: 08/02/17 03:11 pm Title: Always And A Day
You forgot to put the story, you dork lol
Author's Response: O.o strange because both on my laptop and phone it shows. O.o