Oooooh... suspenceful. Pretty good chapter. I wonder whats gonna happen to them... DON'T KILL THEM! LOL. Keep it up.

Author's Response: you are gonna have to wait til part six to find out what happens but i like to make you all suffer so even though i finished it a long long LONG time ago im waiting a few days

I have to say that part 5 was the best so far...and the other 4 were phenomenal to begin with! I can't wait to see what happens in 6. The way that 5 ended makes me soooo curious!!! I'm dying of excitment and anticipation here!!! lol.

Author's Response: aawww thanks so much im glad you like them even though i dont think they are that great

Wow...that's all I can say. I'm curious as to what Howie's plan that he is thinking up is! It keeps mentioning that all of this started for revenge of somethig Kevin's father did? I am dying to know what that is! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read part 4!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Brians story is up now and I actually only have one more story to write. I have the 6th story completed so i have to go back and do the 5th which is half done. Brians story says a little more of why Savage wants revenge.

Woe woe woe,slow down.I mean if people like us reviewers are liking it,why quit cuz five of us won't review.I mean,sometimes people go on vacation or something and if you update and the come back and find that you quit or something cuz they didn't review.I mean,I love the way this story is going and I'm on chap 1.But to admit I really like my stories in clumps.Like cliffhangers cuz it leaves the person guessing.But you're doing good,why stop? Cuz people don't review.I'm about to post a story up.I know I'm not as popular as Mare or Chaos or something but this is for my entertainment.I don't care if no one else likes it.I hope someone else does but I try to make my ideas original.This is original and I like that about this story.Now that I've spoken,I hope that you think about this and change your mind cause I KNOW I wanna see more of this story.I know that for a fact!Have a nice day/night!;)

Author's Response: i guess i am not gonna give up. i will continue writing and thank you so much for taking the time to leave me a note it made my day. hopefully ill have the 4th story up soon.

Hey, feedback can be hard to come by. Don't let that get to ya. Some readers can be too lazy to review, but it doesn't mean that they haven't read your story. Your story idea is interesting, it caught my attention, so I'm hoping that you will update this again as I would like to see it develope more and find out where it goes. As a suggestion, try putting a little more detail into each chapter. I'm not saying that your chapters have to be really long to be interesting, but of my opinion, there isn't enough detail so that it developes the story enough. I think your story would be much better if you tried to write it with more detail. You've got a good story line going, but detail needs to be worked on. Anyway, like I said, I hope you decide to update this again. I'll be waiting. [Alex]

Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to leave feedback that really makes me happy. about the detail thing, right now the story is a sort of skeleton and if people like it enough there will be more added to it. thanks again!