Date: 03/04/09 08:09 am Title: Chapter 1
i am liking this story
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it so far! It's a great plot and it's being executed wonderfully. Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 04:51 am Title: Chapter 8
wow i feel so sorry for nick, i hope it all turns out ok so i can't wait to see what happens next....
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 03:02 am Title: Chapter 8
Nick and Natalie sure are starting something special...but the second half of the story...where Nick didnt know if he was having another dream or it was real....I can't wait to find out! Wow...very good. I can't wait to see what happens!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/04 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 7
ok that better not be another dream!!!!!!!! This story is really fantastic, i can't wait to read more, please update soon
[Report This]Date: 01/01/04 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
i couldn't review after the first chapter because i had to see what happens next, this is a fantastic story so far
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 04:20 am Title: Chapter 7
Another great chapter!!! You are so talented! I like how you had Nick decide to see Natalie...and that he would protect her...and the love scene was vivid, but so good! Can't wait to read more...up date soon! I'm completely drawn!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 04:10 am Title: Chapter 6
Such a great chapter! I am really glad that Aje believes Nick...makes it so he has someone to confide in about his dreams...or nightmares, rather. I can't wait to see where this is going!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 07:05 am Title: Chapter 5
This is really interesting! Nick's dreams are creepy though! I have so many questions running through my head. Please update sooon! Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: I'n glad someone likes this story!!! Sadly, even though I've got a few more chapters written, I still have some questions myself about what should happen next, though I hope that it doesn't last long!
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 06:55 am Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter! Brian was a little harsh there...if I was in his position, I might be a little skeptical, but I would also listen and have some belief that Nick was right. This is really good!
[Report This]Date: 11/30/03 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wasn't expecting all of thatt to be a dream. Good way of surprising the reader! As for Natalie at the party being the same girl from the dream, that is freaky! Please update soon... I am really interestedin this!
[Report This]Date: 11/30/03 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow...great start to a story! Natalie being shot completely caught me off guard and has me wondering why she was...and who did it. Can't wait to read more!!!
