[Report This]Date: 04/12/04 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG THAT IS SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been to Mideival Times...hehe it was fuuuuuun...
[Report This]Date: 04/12/04 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow... Pancake. That's uh...interesting, buddy. LoL! No, so far I love the story and the chapters just get better and better every time. I love you Doek!
[Report This]Date: 03/31/04 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 35
loved it, i cant wait till she gets back to the house
[Report This]Date: 03/29/04 04:38 am Title: Chapter 35
Bout time we see an update for this! I was beginning to think we would never see a new chap! It was sweet though. I enjoyed it! Now update soon and keep up the great work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 03/07/04 08:50 am Title: Chapter 34
hehhehehe i loved that chapter Mia and Cia, Cheech Chong? hehehe Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 03/05/04 12:21 am Title: Chapter 33
I loved both chapters (32 & 33) i can't wait for more. I got my nose peirced and a tattoo and i can understand what mel says when she wants more cuz they are so addictive. i used to have 3 peircings now i have 9, and i'm getting another tat before the end of the month hehehe so i understand where she is coming from. hehehhe
[Report This]Date: 03/04/04 06:43 am Title: Chapter 33
A nose piercing? Eck! I used to want to get a nose piercing, but my uncle Barry talked me out of it. Just so not my thing, especially when it comes to having a sinus cold and then all the snot and boogers and it would get all gross and *gags* Now the tattoo thing...I'm all for it. And my tattoo I got is becoming normal now. Stupid antibiotic ointment...didn't know I was allergic to one of the ingredients in it. Allergic reaction rash is almost gone...and the cortizone cream helps the itch and...whoa! Wait a minute...I'm supposed to be reviewing the chap right now, aren't I? *giggles* Right. On with the task at hand. Great chap. Wonderful writing, and as always, I enjoyed every bit of it. Keep up the awesome work and update soon! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 03/04/04 06:11 am Title: Chapter 32
Ay yi yi! I finally got through the whole chap! Do you even know how long it has taken me? Let's try the ENTIRE day. Do you even know how crappy it is to keep getting interrupted? Ay yi yi. I can keep saying that. Anyway, the chap was good, now that I was able to finish reading it. Seems like Ana is doing alot better and it's awesome how they fixed the room up for her. Hopefully she will like it. I can only begin to imagine how her dad is going to react when he gets back. That surely won't be a very good situation. Keep up the great work and I'm on to read the next chap! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 02/28/04 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 31
I can't wait till Ana gets out if the hospital and i hope Howie can do something about Ana's father, Maybe they could get married ???? hehehe nah that would scare Ana... Pleae update asap
[Report This]Date: 02/26/04 12:30 am Title: Chapter 30
wow i loved those chapters and THANKGOD ANA IS OK.
[Report This]Date: 02/25/04 08:54 am Title: Chapter 30
Aw, what a sweet chap. And a good thing that Ana finally woke up. The girl is in for a rough road of pain. I can only hope that Howie will be able to convince her, along with Mella and the others' help that she needs to stay at Howie and Mella's place. I love how Howie treats Ana. Homeboy is such a sweetheart! Good chap, I enjoyed it! Keep up the great work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 02/24/04 06:22 am Title: Chapter 21
*whistles* Wow, oh man Ana, Mella gotat talk now! Oh man, she gotta say something before something serious happens! Wow, I gotta read the rest!
[Report This]Date: 02/23/04 12:19 am Title: Chapter 28
*wipes away a tear* Damn, you guys got the emotions going on in that chap. I feel where the guys were coming from, but I do stand beside Melicia, backing her up. At least Kieran had the guts to come back and talk to her and explain things. Poor Ana. Just visualizing how she must look is *shivers* Keep up the good work and update soon! Please! And bring Kelly back! She's feeling left out! Did she go away on vacation or something? *hint* Love ya both bunches! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 02/22/04 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 27
Sweet talk with Howie and Melicia. It's good they had that conversation and was able to mend their relationship. But omg, I was sitting on the edge of my seat the whole time while reading the last segment of the chap. I had tears in my eyes. That was horrible! Not the writing of course, but the situation itself. I just don't understand how some parents can act so...can't think of a proper word right now to describe what I'm thinking. And now I have to wait to find out what happens because I have to leave to go get my hair done and who knows how long that is going to take. All I have to say is keep up the awesome work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 02/22/04 06:14 am Title: Chapter 26
Good. AJ and Howie are cool again. If Melicia wasn't stuck in a hospital bed I would suggest she run and hide. Those lectures. Ouch, not fun. Good chap! Keep up the awesome work. I really am loving the story! [Alex]
