[Report This]Date: 02/22/04 06:01 am Title: Chapter 25
Thank God for Ana! Melicia is extremely lucky that Ana found her when she did. A very emotional chap I have to say. Gotta continue reading. [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 02/22/04 05:43 am Title: Chapter 23
Ooh! Drama! Sucks that Mella didn't show up for the concert, but guess it was to be expected. I'm feeling a little bit of sympathy for Howie now...but, geez, things are all messed up at the moment. Poor Ana, poor Howie, poor AJ, and poor Mella. Especially poor Mella now. She definitely got herself caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. It brings good drama to the story and I liked it. The chapter was good. Keep up the great work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 02/21/04 08:04 am Title: Chapter 22
FANTASTIC APSOLUTELY FANTASTIC, hehehe i love the way howie found out... and good on Ana for saying what she did cuz its true, but Ana really has to say something especially since she isn't gonna be home when her dad gets home....something extremely bad is gonna happen, i just have this feeling.... i can't wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 02/20/04 09:28 am Title: Chapter 22
Well, damn! We all knew it was going to happen sometime. I feel terrible for Melicia and AJ, though. And Ana did make a very good point. Very emotional. But we all know this isn't the end of Melicia and AJ's relationship or vice versa when it comes to Ana and Howie. I wonder what's gonna happen next. Awesome job on the chap! I loved it! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 02/19/04 01:29 am Title: Chapter 18
*whistles* Wow, poor Ana! Man that bruise! But that was fast, I mean to fall in love that fast and take it that next step, I hope she knows what she's doing and doesn't come out of it regretting the actions.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/04 12:48 am Title: Chapter 17
Wow, I got around to reading the last few chapters and I must say, wow, I wasn't expecting what would occurr with Ana. Yikes, Mel gotta talk, that's some serious issue, she gotta stop thinking about herself and go save her friend.
[Report This]Date: 02/18/04 10:43 am Title: Chapter 19
Awww! *watches sparks fly* No details? LoL, jk. Dude, where's the hamnurger! jk! I'ma never let you live that down! Good chap, loved the romantic feeling. Both girls getting some hot nookie. SCORE! LoL, I love your guys' writing. Keep up the awesome work! I'm going to continue reading! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 02/18/04 10:28 am Title: Chapter 18
Ooh! Somebody's getting some nookie! Somebody's getting some nookie! And maybe a little more hamnurger on the side! HAHAHA! HAMNURGER! I told you Twinny that I can't get over that word! It's just too fralarious! Hamnurger! Hamnurger! Hamnurger! Hahaha *giggles* Ok, good chap by the way. And I'm sure the hamnurger tasted good! *continues to giggle* Hamnurger... Anyway, well things really seem to be spicing up between Howie and Ana. I wonder what conflicts this could cause. And things between AJ and Mella? I can only wonder what's gonna happen! Keep up the great work and I'm gonna continue reading...after I get me some hamnurger! *runs* [Alex]
Author's Response: I got one word for you, hermana: ?CALLETE! You are such a WIERD twin, I tell you! *clicks tongue* At least I wpelt WEIRD right, ROFLY. Anyway... thanks for the review... I think...
[Report This]Date: 02/18/04 03:16 am Title: Chapter 16
Ahhhh, wow, A.J. is getting all sweet and emotional on her, that is so sweet! hehe. And Poor Ana, I hope she's alright, what's up with that father of her anyways? Well off i go to check out the rest of the story!
[Report This]Date: 02/18/04 01:58 am Title: Chapter 12
LOL, oh man that was funny the whole Howie getting nervous thing. And do I sense some tension between Howie and Ana, hehe. I thought the whole A.j. pancake thing was amusing, hehe.
[Report This]Date: 02/16/04 03:21 am Title: Chapter 11
Ahhhh, A.J. man, what was he thinking? *sigh* Its so true when a person is feeling another one, all the stupid things your heart can tell you. Tsk, tsk A.J. , lol. It was a cool chapter though.
[Report This]Date: 02/16/04 02:55 am Title: Chapter 10
Ahhhh, hehe. Don't mess with Howie Kev! lol, this was a cool chapter girl!
[Report This]Date: 02/16/04 02:42 am Title: Chapter 9
lol, well wow, I wasn't expecting that. Man if Howie only know that his little niece is naughty! hehe. It's cute, off to the next chapter, Peace
[Report This]Date: 02/16/04 02:28 am Title: Chapter 8
Hehe, Ana in the story always makes for a more intriging story, *smiles* Nice chapter, off I go to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 02/14/04 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ahhh, wow, that had to be uncomforable for her and A.J., hehe. And it was cute the relationship between Howie and her. Off I go to the next chapter!
