[Report This]Date: 01/30/04 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww sad. Poor girl. And Howie.
[Report This]Date: 01/30/04 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hey you two! Great finish on the chap! I digged it. But for lack of better words since I just woke up not too long ago... AJ! YOU TURD! What a freakin spaztic moron. Ay yi yi! I guess he doesn't understand the saying, 'think before you speak'. Man, what a load of drama he just caused for Melicia. Shit, I would have kicked him! The jerk... Man, hopefully Howie can perform some miracle working to patch things up between Melicia and Ana. Like I said, AJ! You turd! tsk tsk tsk... I'm glad you finished writing the chap with Ana, Steph. Because it turned out finished alot better then it would have if I would have finished it with you. I loved it! Good job! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 01/30/04 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG that was the funniest thing ever! Kevins joke was great and Howie's revenge was better! The guys are definitely crazy, and it is great that Mella is making friends. Great chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/30/04 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
gurl i loved that chapter, i feel sorry for Aj though, he was just jelous, but he still had no right to say what he did, i hope Mel and Ana will still be friends, cuz its not Mel's fault that AJ got jelous, hehehe i can imagine what Aj's gonna do to make it up to Mel, but i hope Howie doesn't walk in.... i hope Howie can make things alright with Ana,,,,GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/04 05:58 am Title: Chapter 10
This story is great! And this chapter alone was amazing. Incredibly funny.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/04 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
So far So good. That sounds so familiar to me....lol
[Report This]Date: 01/28/04 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
I guess you did get your chapter done with Alex. And it was quite cute. Kevin and the Vette, dude you could make a whole issue of comics based on the hilarity of this chapter. Kelly was a nice edition. Guess Ana just collects friends all over the place. But...can I just say Hummer. Yes, I love the Hummer. Always loved the Hummer. Always will love the Hummer.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/04 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 10
gurl you had me laughing all the way through that chapter..... omg i loved it, i never immagined that Kev would do that to howie.... what i'm wondering is how did howie get the make-up so fast.... was it when he went silent??? I CANT BELIEVE HOW FUNNY THAT CHAPTER WAS THOUGH.... I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER....Kelly and Ana seem kool :) i love the characters in this story :) update A.S.A.P!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 01/28/04 01:20 am Title: Chapter 9
AJ and Melicia are definitely playing with fire in this situation and it's inevitable that they will get caught. I have a feeling that it's going to be Nick who is going to walk in on them during one of their make out sessions. That would be interesting. We did good on the chap, Twinny, but AJ and Melicia are really playing with fire. I just wondering how long it's going to be before they get burnt! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 01/28/04 12:54 am Title: Chapter 8
Hey chickies! Great chap you had and I'm glad you went into a bit of detail about Melicia's first day at her new school. That is always interesting to get to and you guys did a good job at writing it. It seems like Ana is a pretty cool person and should be a great friend towards Melicia. But the AJ and Melicia thing...*clicks tongue* They're not thinking straight. LoL, here I am, one of the co-authors of this story, and I'm saying that. Go fig, huh? Good job on the chap and let's keep up that good work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 01/27/04 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
They are playing with fire, and they nearly got burnt in this chapter, i can't wait to see what happens, but i know that what ever will happen its gonna be fun to read..... hmmm... who will be the first to find out??? maybe Ana?? well thats my guess... I LOVE THIS STORY, YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB SO FAR AND I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTERS...
[Report This]Date: 01/27/04 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
That is so great that Mella made a new friend on her first day, and someone that can relate to her (losing their mothers) and who is her age, might help them both! Her and A.J. better be careful though! Howie would freak if he found out that they had a thing for one another! Great chapter. Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/04 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
That is some territory that I don't think I'd ever want to cross. AJ and Melicia are in some deep shit, no matter how well they think they can hide it. Doesn't take a genius to put together the clues.
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with ya, Chicky-- this can't last long wtihout SOMEONE catching on... the question would be... who will it be?
[Report This]Date: 01/27/04 10:56 am Title: Chapter 8
I LOVED THAT CHAPTER, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE ABOUT HER AND AJE AND HER SCHOOL LIFE, PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/26/04 08:44 am Title: Chapter 7
Well, I'm glad that Howie's being a loving uncle again. And Melicia, listen to what your uncle tells you. Stay away from the illegal stuff; it just isn't fun. Anyway, great chap. Loved the way you and Ana intermingled a whole lot of humor into it. It worked perfectly, and I can see that things are slowly 'heating' up between AJ and Melicia. I can only begin to imagine what may happen in the future between them. I enjoyed the chap. Good job you two! [Alex]
