Date: 09/28/06 03:24 pm Title: Chapter One
OMG!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
Date: 09/28/06 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Two
Ok Ashley great job on the story and I can't wait to see what happens in
the next chapter.
Date: 09/28/06 03:21 pm Title: Chapter Two
It's a shame that SOME cops have to act like such jerks just because they're wearing badges!!
It SHOULD have been obvious to any ignoramus that the guys wouldn't still be standing around there if they had committed a crime!!! DUHHHH!! But since I've read the story before, I can't comment anymore right now. This really is a good story, though.
Date: 09/12/06 03:21 pm Title: Chapter One
So far I'm liking it. You have my attention that's for
sure.
Date: 09/12/06 03:20 pm Title: Chapter One
OMG...Yesssss. This is the one I thought it was!!!!!!!!! Oh this story is sooooooo good. Even thought I know what's gonna be happening, I'm still anxious to re-read it!!!
Date: 09/05/06 11:16 pm Title: Prologue
ashley loved the prologue and can't wait to read chapter one.
Date: 09/05/06 11:16 pm Title: Prologue
think I may have read this one...I won't be sure until I read chapter 1. But if it's the one I think it is, Ash, it IS an awesome story. Can't wait to read it again.
Date: 09/05/06 11:15 pm Title: Prologue
awesome prologue! I can't wait to read the first chapter!
Date: 09/05/06 11:14 pm Title: Prologue
Its reaaalllyyyyyy goood!!!
Date: 08/24/06 04:16 pm Title: Epilogue
Hey, I loved this story! I'm glad I didn't discover it 'till it was already finished because I would have been too impatient to wait between chapters -lol. I was so captured that I read the whole thing in like 3 days.
(I have kids or it probably would have been one sitting.) I'll have to look you up and see what else you have posted... Look forward to hearing more from you!
Date: 08/23/06 06:13 pm Title: Chapter Two
I am loving this story! It really goes in a different direction than most. I'm excited to see what happens next!
Date: 08/17/06 02:00 am Title: Epilogue
hey
i wanted to read the whole story before i gave feedback. It had me hooked becauseit was different, i could really see what was happening and came to care for Amber. Im so happy that Aj and Amber finally got together is a sequelin the works anywhere?? I would love to see how things work out for them.