[Report This]Date: 12/05/03 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Four
Nick is definitely going to have a hard time explaining that little mixup. Then Amber's denial. Yikes, that'll be a rude awakening. I really like where this story is going. Poor kid.
[Report This]Date: 12/05/03 06:15 pm Title: Chapter Four
wow sounds good.. hmm that will teach Nick not to touch things. poor Nick he sounded so scared cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 12/05/03 08:41 am Title: Chapter Four
Man, I so predicted that was going to happen to Nick. Poor Amber; she's going to have a tough road ahead of her. Good chap, keep up the great work, and update soon! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 12/05/03 04:25 am Title: Chapter Three
Damn her parents suck man! It's cool of the guys though!! Good chapters!
[Report This]Date: 12/04/03 06:49 am Title: Chapter Three
Well written chap and I think the Boys have good intentions with wanting to take Amber in since she no longer has anyone. It does seem a bit unrealistic, but will work for your story. I don't understand how her parents could just abandon her though. I mean, Hell, if my daughter was raped, I would be running to the hospital to be right by her side in an instant. Even if I was angry, for whatever reason towards her, I would still hurry to the hospital to make sure she was ok. But to just abandon her without coming to see her? That's just cold and unnatural. Nice way of weeving information into the chap, that's always good. And that doctor...I say he needs an attitude adjustment. Anyway, keep up the good work and update this soon. I'll be waiting! [Alex]
Author's Response: Yeah, it does seem a little unrealistic...as I know something like this probably would never happen...just an idea I came up with, so I'm trying to work with it! Thanks for the review! *smiles* Can't wait to hear what you think of upcoming chapters!
[Report This]Date: 12/04/03 03:00 am Title: Chapter Three
Could the boys be any more of the hero-type? Taking in the girl when her parents won't. Very sweet. You're going to end up having a very emotional story... Great start!
Author's Response: Yeah...I decided to make them "save the day" in this story! lol. HOping that by chapter 8 or 9, it starts picking up and getting to the emotional parts. Thanks for reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/03/03 06:56 am Title: Chapter Three
come on already update again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wanna see what happens (whining)
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Two
I really like this story, and it has some definite possibilities. But, for future references, Doctors aren't allowed to release information about patients to those who are not family members, because it's a breach in HIPPA Regulations. Damn those Nursing Classes. Haha. But, it's really good. And Nick looking like a moron is always funny!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing..I knew about the doctors thing,...3/4 of my family works in hospitals! lol...I just figured, what the heck! hehe...since they were the ones there for her, might as well have them be the ones delivered in info! Ah well...even if that part isn't realitic! Glad u liked it, and yeah, I think we all have fun picking on Nick in our stories! lol...Thanks again :o)
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 08:18 am Title: Chapter Two
Great chap, girl! I had to laugh at what Nick said while he was sleeping. Good way to tie a little bit of humor into the story at that point. You can never go wrong with making Nick look and sound like a complete idiot in a story. Actually, I feel kinda bad for him...LoL....NAH! Anyway, I enjoyed the chap and I'm waiting to find out what happens next. Amber is in for a real emotional roller coaster. Keep up the great work and update soon! [Alex]
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing....I agree...making fun of Nick is always a good way to lighten things up a little or add some humor...although it is sad that EVERYBODY at one point or another makes a crack at him! Poor Nicky...hehe. Anyways, I have about 2 pages done of the next chapter...hoping to have it up in the next couple of hours. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 07:07 am Title: Chapter Two
i cant believe you just left me like that! you have to update soon!
Author's Response: lol...I'm sorry...people always tell me I end chapters in bad places! (oops! hehe) I'm gonna try to update tomorrow! Thanks for another review :o)
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 07:05 am Title: Chapter Two
Hey now they cant blame our boys they where trying to help her. Good Chapter cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing....i have a few plans for that...might show up in the next chapter or so. Just have to wait and see where things are going! I'll t ry to do a chapter tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 04:35 am Title: Chapter One
you cant leave me haning you have to update soon! what a great story you are so talanted
[Report This]Date: 12/02/03 04:29 am Title: Prologue
oh my gosh that was so sad! a great chapter please please please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! You are my number 1 supporter for all 3 of my stories! :o)!!! I just added another chapter. Hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: 12/01/03 10:15 pm Title: Chapter One
Great, I like it so far. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Still hoping I can pull a story like this off, the more in to it I get...only time will tell! :o)
[Report This]Date: 12/01/03 04:43 am Title: Chapter One
Oh wow sweetie that is good. Keep it coming your a good writer
Author's Response: Thanks again! And thanks for the compliment..made me feel really good :o) Should be updated soon!
