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Reviewer: Ayleen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/03 06:17 pm Title: ch 6

AWW thats so sweet!!! i love this chapter!!! can't wait for 7

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Date: 12/20/03 06:03 pm Title: ch 6

Awww...I feel so bad for AJ and Merenda. It sounds like Gracie is sicker than they all thought. I hope the diary entries that AJ read made him realize that Merenda really did care for him still, although it must have been hard to read it. Great job! I can't wait to read whats next!

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Date: 12/20/03 07:58 am Title: ch 5

So sweet that Merenda saved all of that stuff for A.J. in the box. I really hope that Gracie will be okay! Merenda in the church was so sad. I was almost in tears! Great job and update soon!

Reviewer: Ayleen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/03 07:37 am Title: ch 5

AWW i want to cry!!! i loved the chapter!! i can't wait til you update next!!!

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Date: 12/20/03 07:35 am Title: ch 4

thats a great chapter! i can feel the emotion and the vivid details. i hope that Gracy will be ok. on to the next chapter!!!

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Date: 12/20/03 07:32 am Title: ch 3

AWW that poor girl! great chapter! must read on!

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Date: 12/20/03 07:30 am Title: ch 2

aww thats so sweet. great chapter and im gonna read on!

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Date: 12/20/03 07:07 am Title: ch 4

Wonder what is in the box. Poor A.J...he's so upset about Merenda keeping Gracie a secret for so long, and probably about his daughter being sick too. I hope Gracie will be okay...scary stuff she is facing. Great job and update soon!!!

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Date: 12/20/03 06:59 am Title: ch 3

Aww...so sweet! It sounds like A.J. is dealing pretty well with the news of havinga daughter. It's sad he found out when he became sick, but a great twist (?) for the story! Nick's flashback was sweet. Really loving your story!

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/03 04:51 pm Title: ch 2

Awww..such a sweet Chapter....A.J. sounds so hurt though, even though he was the one to say he didnt want kids yet. I don't blame him though. Gracie must be so scared! poor thing. Great job! I can't wait to read more!!!

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Date: 12/19/03 07:34 am Title: ch 1

Wow...poor Gracie....and Merenda...and A.J. I can't imagine being sick like that...or if my chld was (when i have kids...that is) And then for A.J. to find out like that that he has a daughter? Poor thing. I am really loving where this story is going. Completely drawn! Update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: Ayleen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/03 07:22 am Title: ch 1

aww im gonna cry! i hope that AJ will forgine Randy anmd get back together!!! great chapter and i look forward to the next!