Date: 11/16/09 12:35 am Title: Chapter One
Wow, this is really good so far! I've written a lot of BSB fics on here and decided to poke around to see if there were any OC ones, and I have to say I am pleasantly surprised! I wish there were more :)
Date: 06/22/06 11:15 pm Title: Chapter One
Wow this is really good, i'm am a slightly unusually obsessive fan of the OC, and i think you've captured the characters really well!!!! I'm very impressed!
Date: 08/29/05 05:06 am Title: Chapter One
awww--poor ryan! I can't believe how upset he is at recieving gifts. then again, from the way he was raised.......it does make sense. i luv it so far, and your writing is awesome!
Date: 08/29/05 04:55 am Title: Prologue
awww, who could hate a little boy? i dont understand how people can be so cruel
Date: 01/05/04 05:56 pm Title: Chapter One
Hey! You've got a good story goin'. I don't know much about the O.C., so I don't know who the characters are, but just reading it as a story, it's awesome so far. Keep it up! Can't wait for another chapter!