Date: 01/23/09 12:10 am Title: Chapter 4
oh my god...that's just, sick. But it is a good story though.
Date: 01/23/09 12:09 am Title: Chapter 15
That really gave me chills...*shivers*
Date: 02/22/08 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 15
Chills once more...you are so gonna make me afraid to stay home alone! At least Mark seems to have some clues for the police!
Date: 02/22/08 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh shit....Nick thinks AJ knows something...so that cannot be good. I got chills reading this chapter. It is some sick, twisted shit though...but I love the story anyways!
[Report This]Date: 08/04/05 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
i have been following this story on ur wedsite and am dieing for it to finish..
[Report This]Date: 03/04/05 09:46 am Title: Chapter 14
Great so far...I can't wait to see more! Nick makes such a good bad guy, huh?! LOL I love your flare, don't be afraid to let loose and put it all out on the table! The things that shock or scare me are the things I love the most!
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 01:33 am Title: Chapter 14
omg great chapter, i wonder what aj knows and how much he knows, oh i hope i hope i hope nick doesnt do anything to aj or the other guys. please update soon i really like how this is
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 01:29 am Title: Chapter 13
the poliece might be able to figure out who the girls are by their footprints wont they? and even though nick used water to wash the blood, with the chemicals, blood will still be found, i want to know what happens and if he gets caught!
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 01:24 am Title: Chapter 12
dayum two girls in one night! thats insane but for the most part the chapter was good but the tenses didnt always flow.
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 01:13 am Title: Chapter 11
ick shes so annoying i really dont like her....hhhmmm wonder if nick will do something to her and kill her, i only hope his issues dont worsen and he ends up killing his friends, that would ruin the story
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 01:09 am Title: Chapter 10
oooohhhh shes gonna be in trouble. wonder what nicks gonna do to her, i hope he tortures her more since he didnt with amy with amy he just killed her.... eh ive got a twisted mind lol im really getting into this story
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 01:04 am Title: Chapter 9
what pain is nick feeling? did something happen to him that is making him like this? dayum i cant believe how uncariring he is. btw i didnt know until a few minutes ago who you are lol i nominated you at the stripped awards and dream awards just to let you know. good luck and great chapter
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 12:57 am Title: Chapter 8
another great chapter, this chapter made me think of this thing i saw on unsolved mysterises before, this woman was doing readings and stuff and said that certain people who are serial killers were destined to be them because of hwo the stars were arranged or the planets aligned. lol maybe thats why nick is the way he is. another great chapter though
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 12:51 am Title: Chapter 7
ooooohhh another victim for nick, when is this guy ever gonna stop? hes got issues, really big issues
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 12:35 am Title: Chapter 6
ooooohhhh nicks got some attutitude. i wonder when the others are really gonna try and figure things out. Great chapter i really liked it
