[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 12:29 am Title: Chapter 5
oooohhhh nicks actually starting to think about what he is doing. hhhmmmmm wonder if he will ever tell anybody what he is doing. this makes me think of csi, it would be such a cool case for csi to come into. you know they always figure out what happened, who did it and they always get the bad guy. I wonder how they would handle this case and if they would be able to catch nick. would they find his shoe prints and match his shoes? Or maybe someone will see him in his outfit and even though not know its him call in csi and they track his tire tracks, as for the blood thing, isnt blood always traceable? he is doing a pretty good job getting rid of the evidence so if this was a csi episode, it would be exciting to see what csi would do and how bsb would handle it, how nick would react. great job i really like this story
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 12:24 am Title: Chapter 4
I cant believe the kind of guy that you have turned nick into. however i am really enjoying this story. you are a really good writer with a lot of talent and you do good with details and creating the picture. keep up the great work
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 12:17 am Title: Chapter 3
omg nick is such a fuckin asshole i cant believe that he raped her then killed her what a sicko! this story is really good though but fuck hes an ashhole and this is the love of my life! or actually one of the loves of my life
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 12:10 am Title: Chapter 2
hhhhmmmm wonder what nick is doing to these girls
[Report This]Date: 12/28/04 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
omg i cant believe my nicky is a bad guy
[Report This]Date: 12/25/04 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
wow...I was wondering when you'd update again! Great chapter!!! Nick sure is a sick, evil bastard. I wonder what will happen if the bodies are found. If he will be identified as the serial killer or what. Update soon, cuz I am dying to know!
[Report This]Date: 12/22/04 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Darn that was to good I can't wait to read the rest of it.
[Report This]Date: 12/20/04 01:04 am Title: Chapter 13
I'll bet Nick forgot something important! I just bet it! A.J.'ll be right - he'll have screwed something up now & get caught & that'll be the END of BSB all because of HIM! Dammit! UPDATE!!!! ~Lenni~
[Report This]Date: 09/02/04 01:50 am Title: Chapter 12
Honestly, I thought this chapter really didn't help the story at all. I know someone else wrote the chapter but the writing styles are really different, and I had a hard time seeing the point of that chapter. Sowwy :(
Author's Response: well, I'm working on a re-write.. I didn't like this chapter myself
[Report This]Date: 08/30/04 02:03 am Title: Chapter 12
oh dear lord...that had to have been the most graphic, gruesome thing I have ever read...great chapter...but dude...I hope I dont have nightmares tonight....update soon! I'm really wanting to know what happens.
[Report This]Date: 08/30/04 01:47 am Title: Chapter 11
Naomi is a snake...lol...I dont blame Nick for being pissed and not wanting to give her another chance. I was happy to see an update...and 2 chapters? *grins* love it!
[Report This]Date: 07/24/04 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
what did i tell u steph if u make nick kill her im gonna kill u. he's already thinkin about it.See i told u naomi was a nice person she's being honest to him so dont kill her.....if u do i wont leave reviews anymore..j/k
[Report This]Date: 07/23/04 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
So Naiomi is a sleaze too taking advantage of Nick? Only difference is, sounds like she's falling for him and he still wants to kill her. The room key thing was quite a scare. I thought for sure it would have fallen out at the cabin with Amy and him be traced that way. Great chapter! I'm totally loving this story! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/12/04 03:53 am Title: Chapter 9
it was good part of me wasglad he shot that bitch shit she called every bsb fan easy and steph if u make him kill naomi im gonna kill u...remember i know whwere u live
[Report This]Date: 07/11/04 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow. Excellent chapter...sick and deranged, but that's what's drawn me to the story! The drama and suspense! Anywho, Wow...Nick has some serious shit going on in that head of his. And Amy being a fan....what a way to make things complicated. Woah. I'm wondering if he still plans on killing Naiomi too. Please update soon! I am addicted to this story!
Author's Response: I'm glad u like it. This story has become my baby almost, lol, though I take all of my writing seriously. Keep an eye out for more twists and turns... I've been jotting down all sorts of notes for upcoming chapters!
