[Report This]Date: 06/28/04 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
Amazing chapter...wow...and its okay about the updating thing. It takes me forever too...mainly due to lack of motivation cuz I feel my writing sucks. Anyways, the chapter was interesting. I can't wait to see what happens with Naiomi...and what Nick does to her. Please update soon as you're able. I love the story!
[Report This]Date: 06/10/04 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hey i love this story...i hope u write more soon....keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/04 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awww...poor Naiomi...if only she knew what Nick had planned for her. I'm thinking people will definitely catch on though if he tries anything, since Aje knows he is going out with her and all now. Hmm...so great! Please update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/04 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, Nick's mind has gone far beyond sick and twisted. Wow...whats really sick is there really are people like this out there somewhere! AJ's catching on to something though. Unless he wants to be caught, Nick better put his anger in to check and start acting normal. Great job! I totally love this story!
[Report This]Date: 05/11/04 02:34 am Title: Chapter 7
I am dying to know what happens next. Please update soon! And HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/10/04 03:17 am Title: Chapter 7
That nasty sick R.Kelly mug!Grrr....death to NICKOLAS!DEATH TO HIM!Well R.Kellly didn't reallu rape the girls...oh nevermind.Stupid Nick.I should beat the crap...can I kill Nnick yet?
[Report This]Date: 03/29/04 03:15 am Title: Chapter 5
Nick deserves to be caught for what he's doing. IF the others find out, they'll be shocked beyoned belief! Still amazes me that Nick is capable of such! Definitely not like any other story I've read. Please update soon. I love the story!
[Report This]Date: 02/02/04 06:58 am Title: Chapter 4
Overall this story is great..... to an amature killer!! But like a professional like me... i found tons and tons of things wrong "Nick" did. He did things in the rape scene that was un-nesscessary. He also missed alot of thins to do and how to do it "right" in the murder scene. BUt overall very sweeeeeeet.
Author's Response: Dude, we're not all sick and twisted 'pros' like you, but thanks for your help with chapter 4.
[Report This]Date: 02/02/04 06:26 am Title: Chapter 4
THAT WAS SOME CRAZY ASS SHIT..............HE HAS TO GET CAUGHT THAT SICK FUCK!.....U AND CARLMICHAEL PUT TOGETHER ARE .......SHIT I DUNNO....IM SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!...AND THAT IS A RARE THING!!
Author's Response: Yeah I know, you usually have a lot to say to me, lol. See u in school!
[Report This]Date: 02/02/04 12:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Not to gross anyone out or anything, but I actually love this story. I mean the graphic sexual part and the details make this story more interesting. Whne you said there will be no more graphic scenes, that makes the story more exciting, so don't get rid of the graphic scenes. I like this story a lot, so please let me know when you update! Thanks
[Report This]Date: 02/02/04 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
This is definitely dark, but a really good story. It takes a twisted human to become addicted to rape and murder! Nobody ever percieves Nick as being so...violent. Update soon, cuz I am hooked on this story!
[Report This]Date: 01/29/04 09:45 am Title: Chapter 3
That was a great story so far. It was interesting to see a different side of nick for a change. He was so violent and cruel. I like it. And i like how u get into detail with the emotions that go on b/w each character. Please keep me updated asap!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/04 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG..NIck is such an ass!!! I cannot believe he is doing this to these poor girls! Your story is great so far, and has definitely struck an interest for me. Please update soon. I can't wait to see where this is going!
[Report This]Date: 01/12/04 02:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Little creepy, but I like it!
[Report This]Date: 01/12/04 02:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my... Nick's a rapist type of man. Never thought I'd see the day. You have a real talent for writing, Keep it up.
