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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/10 07:21 am Title: Prologue

I feel so bad I didn't notice that that you had completed this story and I missed it! Anyways, the last few chapters were amazing, poor Nick will never be the same. But I did however like the dream idea with AJ, both endings were wonderful. I finished incomplete finally as well! Love your stories as always, the ending was good!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 07:01 pm Title: 47 - Alternate Ending

Aww lol I like this ending best of all :O) although if this had happened your story would have been a very short one!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 06:57 pm Title: 46 - Endings

Excellent job Carrie. I'm so proud of you for finishing the stry and having such a realistic, even though very sad, ending. I hope to see a new story from you soon!

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/10 05:09 am Title: 47 - Alternate Ending

Great story!! I loved it!! I do like this happier ending better. It leaves ya feeling less depressed than the other ending, but that's just me. LOL I love when authors give multiple endings, that way the readers can put whatever closure they choose on the story. If I were AJ and I had that dream, I would be stuck to Nick's ass until he got his shit together! I'm looking forward to more stories from you! :)

Author's Response: Lol like the comment about AJ being stuck to Nick's ass....yeah, the other ending would leave you pretty depressed. Hopefully readers didn't stop at the first ending.....

Reviewer: dolphingirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 08:51 pm Title: 47 - Alternate Ending

wow I like this ending so much better great story just great!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I agree, this ending was a better ending. Thanks for reading & reviewing.

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 01:37 pm Title: 47 - Alternate Ending

I like this ending better and yes he never should have left Nick alone. But it was a great story, sad but great. Hope to read more from you soon :)

Author's Response: I liked this ending better too....thanks for the compliments about the story.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 01:31 pm Title: 45 - Hello & Goodbye

WOW that was sooo good. Glad they got Jane to sign. Poor Nick...he will never be himself again..that is heartbreaking. But I love Aaron standing up to Jane, that was brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: barbyka16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/10 02:31 pm Title: 45 - Hello & Goodbye

i'm soo glad all this drama with Jane is finaly over i just hate reading stories about her bc i know they dont get along good in real life and i'm always sad for nick after reading :(
but anyway great chapter!!
and poor kev and nick and aaron!
oh just want to hug everyone :) lol
sooo update soon again :)
oh and hugs to you to for writing such a great story :)

Author's Response: Hugs to you for taking the time to review! I too am glad the drama with Jane is over....she can be exhausting to write about ;)  I'm glad you like the story!!

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/10 06:20 am Title: 45 - Hello & Goodbye

Oh man, when Aaron was totally trash talking his mother I was all like "YESSS!!" LOL She deserves it, what a bitch.

I really like how you write Nick in this story. It is pretty accurate how brain injury victims can end up. My father had a brain aneurysm when I was 9 and after he came out of his coma, he didn't know who anyone was and his mental age was reduced from a 37 year old to a 13 year old. Great job and update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you like how Nick is written in this story. Wow Ashley, that is awful to hear about your father. Brain injury victims seldom rebound from something so catastropic, this has been a very hard story to write.

Reviewer: bsb4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/10 10:14 pm Title: 45 - Hello & Goodbye

great story

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/10 01:27 am Title: 44- Jane Doesn't Get It

God, Jane is such a clueless bitch! I want to strangle her! Man, poor Kev is about at the end of his rope! Great chapter! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm sure there are a few people in this story that wants to strangle that woman! Yes, Kev is trying to do his best to be respectful but she has pushed to the limits, poor guy! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: dolphingirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 09:38 pm Title: 44- Jane Doesn't Get It

wow I was hoping that jane would get it well anyway please update soon love it very much

Author's Response: Don't give up hope - I'm not done yet!!

Reviewer: dolphingirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 03:17 am Title: 43 - Heated

sweet update please update again soon need to see who gets it.

Author's Response: Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 03:17 am Title: 43 - Heated

Wow, shit is gonna hit the fan now! I can't tell you enough how much I'm glad you started writing again, I just love your stories! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment - I'm flattered!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/10 04:37 pm Title: 43 - Heated

Wow wow wow. Loving Aaron in this chapter. And the end was funny, kevin putting them on a time out. Great update and happy Easter!

Author's Response: Happy Easter to you!! Thanks for reviewing!