Date: 11/12/11 01:08 am Title: Chapter 35
So happy for the update! I love the way you intermingle the flashbacks into the present story. And again, I'm drawn to the way you write about the relationships between the guys....it's the way I tend to imagine them.
Keep updating, Marina, and I'll keep reading.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
I'll keep writing Pam. Not so frequent updates because, well it's me lol but I'll keep writing for sure so thank you soooo much for reading it and reviewing it :)
Date: 11/12/11 12:10 am Title: Chapter 35
New Chapter Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! That is all. lol
No, but seriously I hope you keep this coming. I'm loving this reconciliation with Nick and AJ, and how emotional it's been. It's amazing to see just how affected the others were by his leaving, that instead of drawing them together, it drove them apart. Needless to say, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! I can't believe people are still reading and enjoying my story. Thanks :)
Date: 11/11/11 07:17 am Title: Chapter 35
I was so excited to see this updated again! Especially since it hasn't been that long (okay it was long but for you...short lol) since the last update. I love the Nick/AJ bonding in this. I don't believe Kevin is dead either, he can't be dammit :P.
Update again soonish :)
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you, Rose! Yes, that wasn't that long 'for me' lol I'll try to update sooner this time, maybe I'll go for a personal record ;)
Date: 11/11/11 06:08 am Title: Chapter 35
I was so excited when I saw that this story had been updated and I was so not disapointed! What a great chapter! You really did a wonderful job painting the picture of Kevin/Nick and AJ's realtionships through the flashbacks.
I'm glad AJ refuses to believe Kevin is dead! I'm hoping that means soon we will see that he is alive!
Hoping for another chapter soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I love Kevin/Nick and Kevin/AJ brotherly relationship so I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job depicting it :)
Date: 11/11/11 04:24 am Title: Chapter 35
I swear, reading this makes me miss Kevin more and more, and I have a feeling that this is very much metaphorical. You portray Kevin's role in the boys' lives very well, and I love how you've managed to keep AJ true to life. Just like how AJ always sounds hopeful that Kevin will come back to them and the group, AJ remains hopeful that Kevin is still alive and refuses to accept the "declaration" that he's dead and is set on not letting Kevin break that promise! Such a great update Marina, and I seriously can't wait for the next one! Please don't keep us waiting for long! ;) <3
Author's Response:
Thank you! Wow, I love when a reviewer talks about what I feel is very important for the story like all the similarities to the real boys no matter how different the boys in my story are (because after all it's an AU), so you have no idea how much I liked your review and how good it made me feel :) I'm not promissing to update 'soon' because real life never lets me fulfill my world when I do it, but I'm not letting this story die so I'll be back, count on it.
Date: 11/11/11 04:10 am Title: Chapter 35
HOLY SHIT ON A STICK!!!
Just thought I'd come and say that I shit myself upon seeing this update. I haven't read it yet... just thought I'd be the first to review on this chapter and share. ^_^ LOL!! And now, I shall read it!! :D
Date: 10/16/11 12:56 pm Title: Prologue
Hey I just stumbled upon this story now and I`m wondering if you plan on continuing it? I love the interaction you have written between the guys and with them being ``brothers.``
Yeah come one Kevin can`t be dead because of the vision. Please continue writing, hope for an update!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm trying to finish a chapter right now, so yes, there is more to come but just not as fast as I would like it.
Date: 03/12/11 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 32
Well I started reading this and its very interesting! I love science fiction, you have done a wonderful job with this. Looking forward to seeing more!
Date: 03/07/11 02:27 am Title: Chapter 34
OMG. I almost had a heart attack when I got the email about this update. I'm so excited that you're writing again. Your author's note is very interesting! Love the cross between AU/Real life. And I can't believe Kevin was killed off! Holy cow!
Author's Response:
Wow people, I can't believe all these reviews. I was really expecting like a couple of reviews this week not four on the same day I updated the story. It makes me so happy that I opened Word to keep writing... I haven't really written anything so far but who knows maybe another review and I will be inspired lol Thank you!
Date: 03/07/11 01:59 am Title: Chapter 34
Oh...my god. You updated. Holy Hell. When I saw my update email I had to reread to make sure I wasn't crazy lmao. I'm glad to see your muse has been revived and I'm definitely looking forward to you writing again. :). I loved this chapter, and I still love this story. I reread this in one sitting to refresh myself since I was so happy this got updated lol.
Welcome back!
Author's Response:
Thank you again, Rose. You really contributed to me coming back saying that you were still waiting for an update. I hope not to disappoint you. I don't want to promise frequent updates right now but I'm really trying to finish the next chapter fast so I can update it soon and then start working on another one and so on :)
Date: 03/07/11 01:46 am Title: Chapter 34
Oh My FREAKING GOD!!! Whaaaaat? I cannot believe I am reading the next chapter to Yesterday's Blue Skies on 3/6/11. Like never thought this would happen. It's funny too because when stories go on break, you usually have to read back a little bit to remember what happened, but this one, totally remembered everything. So awesome, keep it up because I'm really excited. : D
You are a meanie though, all those years without an update and then you kill Kevin off within the first Chapter back?! It's just like X-men III when Cyclopse died in the first five minutes of the film! lmao Not cool, there better be some secret stuff going on with that. lol
Author's Response:
Wow thank you. I can't believe that you remembered everything, that makes me so happy :) Although now I'm thinking that maybe I should have added a little summary at the beginning of the chapter because everybody else has probably forgotten most of the story lol I sent the chapter to mare and mersey with a summary but forgot to do it here... I guess people will just have to go back if they don't remember things and when they do it I hope they feel free to point out my grammar mistakes because I keep finding them in every chapter lol
Date: 03/07/11 12:26 am Title: Chapter 34
OMG! OMG! OMG! Has it really been four years? I don't care! I'm just really glad you are continuing this story. Even not being with the others for years, there is still a connection for AJ. I love his reaction to seeing the older Nick. On some level, AJ knew something had happen to Kevin; this was the reason for his "dream" four years ago. Of course, we know Kevin isn't really dead....right?
Glad you're back! I'll be looking forward to the next update.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Pam, is that you? Because I got a little confused by the name Balance hehe. Thank you for the review and yes, in fiction it has been four years... in real life more like almost six lol As for Kevin, I will have to keep writing (I'm trying not to stop) and you will have to keep reading :)
Date: 09/05/08 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 32
hey
i love this story
will you ever update???
please???
Date: 05/16/08 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 32
hey
i just found this story and i have to tell you i really like it
its great
and i hope you'll update soon
i want to know what happend next
Date: 03/28/08 10:15 am Title: Chapter 32
Ok I'm completely hooked on this story!! Can't wait for an update =)
