Date: 03/28/08 08:19 am Title: Prologue
Okay... so I just started reading this story, and I'm freaking hooked!! Lol. I love reading stories where the guys' possess supernatural powers or whatever. Gave it a try myself. But I seriously can't wait to read more... it's a perfect blend of suspense, sadness, drama, comedy and all that jazz. Need to know more about AJ and what's gonna happen (kinda glad that the light is on him, lol) but can't wait for an update!! Good job hun!!
Date: 03/28/08 06:53 am Title: Chapter 25
Ok I've been reading this all day! I love it so far...can't wait to find out more about Nick's "dreams"
Date: 03/27/08 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ok, I just started reading this story and I just wanted to tell you that I love it so far! It's so original...I love finding out more about their powers!
Date: 01/16/08 01:39 am Title: Chapter 32
I just finished reading this story and I think it's absolutely amazing. Completely original and well put together. Can't wait for a new chapter!
Date: 12/27/07 10:00 am Title: Chapter 32
agh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This can't be it?!??!?!?!?!? Oh my gosh, I was right, I'm so going to cry!!!!!! You leave us hangin' here???????? No!!!!!!!!! ok, sorry, I already said that. I just have to tell you that I have been so wrapped up in the last nine chapters that I thought I still had like four to go. Not joking, it can't end here. You have to update! Maybe I'll just have to go read more stuff of yours to take my mind off it lol. Seriously, I just want to say again that this is a wonderful story and probably one of my favorites on this site. I'm sooooooo glad I read it. Kudos to you really! I love it! Would love to see the rest, but I do understand how that goes. lol don't even ask how long The Day I Fall has been in the works haha. That totally makes me a hypocrite for crying about you not updating. But this story is waaaaaaayyyy better than my piece of crap unfinished story, so yours should get finished. lol ok I'll stop now. sorry. ok that's a lie. I have ta go cry on the message board too now. but then I'll stop. Awesome awesome awesome *skips off to add this story to my favorites*
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much. I have been enjoying every single one of your reviews, they are awesome. I so need to find time not only to finish this story but to read yours too :) Again, thank you so much for all your kind words.
Date: 12/27/07 07:37 am Title: Chapter 23
awww, I can only imagine those guys as a bunch of rambunctious boys. All together nonetheless. That would be crazy. Still loving this story, just been really busy this month as I'm sure most are. I'm going to be really sad when I reach the last posted chapter. I think you should update. lol as if you've never heard that before. Btu really, I will be sad when i don't get to read the ending. You're right, these little bsb chapters are really cute and it's fun catching a glimpse of them growing up, but I am really fascinated by the Nicky dreams subplot. I know it all ties in together, but I love how you're doing it. Great job as always!
Date: 12/11/07 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
LMAO they all see themselves hurting each other and Nicky sees a girl. That made my day. Of course she's more intricate to the plot than that, but still great way to lighten a stressful moment. Great job! And these rebel visitors coming aboard and Nick going to the rebel base... things are getting interesting! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 12/11/07 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
awwwww. that was the sweetest chapter ever! I loved it!! AJ calming Kevin down. *tears* Seriously, great chapter! I also loved the flashbacks. Great back stroy. It explains a lot about Kevin. He's even more of a tragic character. Why is it the leaders cures to always have to bear the burden alone? It seems its that way with all great heros.
Date: 12/05/07 07:06 am Title: Chapter 12
awwww. That was really sweet. I love those cute little guys. (hehe little, cause really those Backstreet boys are just tiny in real life, well not nick, but you know what I mean.) Anyway, Wow. I have been so caught up in this story I forgot to review each chapter. But the story is so fascinating. It's really kind of tragic. But I love all the depth you've out into it. I love finding out about the history bits and pieces at a time. I kind of feel like AJ feels. Like everyone knows more than I do and I just want the truth. That is brilliant on your part because it makes us (the readers) really understand AJ and what he's going through. I feel like I can understand everything he's thinking and feeling and I just feel so bad for him and scared for him and frustrated all at the same time. But then he talks to his brothers and they love him so much that you feel relieved and you just want to cry for them all. Very well done Marina, I'm not kidding! I am in LOVE with this story!
Date: 12/05/07 05:12 am Title: Chapter 5
Seriously, I don't know how you do it. That whole chapter was just dialog. I haven't really read another story like that before. It's sort of baffling. I also thought this was a very creative way to introduce a lot of their powers. Awesome job. So far, my theory is that Jeff is a human with powers like them. But I'm often waaayyy off with my theories. Hahahahaha ANyway, just have to say again how much I am enjoying this story. Going to read more tonight after I put the kids in bed. Yay! Then I will probably story by the message board and tell everyone over there that they need to read it too!!! It's a nice different fun story. Yay Marina!
Date: 12/02/07 11:06 am Title: Chapter 4
OK, I'm tired, I must stop for now. lol. I love all the different dynamics in the relationships. You're very good with your character development. I love how you have AJ and Nick always at each others throats. And the the relationship between both AJ and Howie, and AJ and Kevin are very realistic to me. Plus, I like Jeff. He could be my hero too, I've decided. lol. I'm so curious to see where all of this is going. I'm definitely "hooked" now. Props to you hun, because I can't remember the last time I couldn't wait to be able to pick a story back up. I'm sure I'll be back soon. Oh, AND, I also love the fact that you chose to tell this story from AJ's POV. He's the one I probably connect with the least normally so I like that I'm getting a glimpse into his mind here.
Date: 12/02/07 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1
I actually really like this story so far. I mean its early in the story yet and I hate to sound surprised. lol. But It's different. Plus I'm sort of a comic book nerd. I love people with powers. I can't wait to find out what all their powers are. Reading this makes me want to write that Firefly fanfic I've thought of in the past. Ever seen it? Or the movie Serenity? I'm in love with that series. The movie could have been better, butt he series is like one of my favorites ever. Ok, sorry. I don't think I've ever read any of your stories before, so I'll warn you about my rambling reviews now... (I talk too much) anyway. I like how this is written so far. Like 95 % dialog. That's hard to do. I couldn't pull it off. Well done there and well done for keeping my interest through yet another chapter. (That's also hard to do.) If I make it through more than like 5 chapters of a story its like a miracle. lol. I sort of suck like that. But this one intrigues me and it's bringing out the si-fi nerd in me that I don't let out very often. lol so hopefully I will see it through to the end. (or all that's posted anyway)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for finding the time to read the story and for the long reviews that I'm really enjoying :) I'm not a comic book reader but I like sci-fi movies and love people with powers too hehe. I have only seen an episode of Serenity but I thought it was a good show so I'll have to look out for the DVDs at some point because I'm curious about the show and the movie. Yay to sci-fi nerds :)
Date: 12/01/07 09:32 pm Title: Prologue
this is very intriguing. First chapter and you've already got me wondering what the heck is going... but in a good way lol. Congrats on being feature of the month hun! I look forward to reading the rest of this story!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/07 07:53 am Title: Chapter 32
I'd leave a longer review but its late and I'm a bit tired lol. But this is a great fic, and its so hard to find a good BSB Sci-fi lol. So please, go back to updating this. :)
