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Reviewer: KissTheRainGirl12489 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/04 11:17 pm Title: Ch 1

*blinks* wow.UPDATE!That was cool!Hehe.That was awsome.There's only one thing I don't like about pretty much all your stories.Nothing bad or anything.They all got good content but I don't like it all clumped together.You know how you do like this. then you start a new sentence.I know this is the proper way to write but please please please could you write like this so it's easier to see between the paragraphs.=).Now can you please update.I mean if ya don't wanna do it the way I prefer that's cool cuz it's your story n stuff.I mean *stiff* it's easier on my eyes cuz Ii gotta wear upgly glasses but OTHER THAN THAT.I wanna an updattttttttttttte.Okay I'll leave ya alone.

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/04 07:00 pm Title: Ch 1

really great beginning. I can't wait to see what happens!