Date: 08/09/04 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is an interesting story. We don't get many history pieces here in Absolute. I'm really looking forward to this. You seem to be pretty accurate in the descriptions, which is fantastic. I might suggest separating your paragraphs for an easier read. But I love it.
Date: 05/31/04 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
Vic,I don't know why no1 has reviewed but they are so freakin stupid b/c this story is probably your best and I'm serious.Every chapter it seems is a tearjerker and I can't count how many times or how many people I wanted to kill any this story.NEWayz,liked thepart where Jerald asked if Brian had ever seens a women =D.Cracked me up!The reason I think this is uch a