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Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/04 01:03 am Title: Weaving Intentions

Man that Brian had a very dirty mouth. But it was intense that sence it was great I love it though. Also That was intense between Howie and Ori. But what happen in the past stay in the past I hope that doesn't come back to bite him about Christina. But darn why the new happy family had to get together for that night when Howie and Ori are going to hang out together. I hope they had fun and crazy and steammy one lol! I just hope that I don't have to wait to long for it plz pretty plz lol!

Author's Response: Thank you from both of us! And another chapter will be out soon, I promise.

Reviewer: SweetAngelicAngel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/04 05:03 am Title: Weaving Intentions

Man, Brian's got a stick shoved far up his butt hole. He's being a brat. I was reading your response to one of the other reviews and it is amusing to see the different take on Brian's character as opposed to the normal bible boy. You guys are doing a really good job on this. Keep up the good work and update soon! [Alex]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And yeah, Brian's a brat. Gotta love it.

Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/04 08:23 pm Title: Weaving Intentions

At least Howie and AJ get alone good...they sure did have an in depth convo about Oriana. Hopefully she wont freak when she finds out about Christina. I wonder if Teag will talk some sense in to Brian and make him realize that Oriana is awesome. If not...things wont end well!

Author's Response: Gotta give Howie and AJ the best friend title, right? Only seems fair! And, let's just say, that why would we want things to end well? Let's cause chaos! Thanks for the review, Starry Eyes and I love you!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/04 03:27 am Title: Weaving Intentions

Lmao! AJ & Howie are SO funny together! Lol. Cute chapter - liked it. Hehe. More Brian-*grins cheesily*-even if he IS an ass in this. Lol. UPDATE! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: So, yeah, decided I really like the idea of responding to all my reviews. It's a nice little treat for the reader I suppose, which is compliments of Mare. But, thanks for the review, Starry Eyes and I really appreciate it. And you will be getting a lot more of Brian, trust me. And you gotta love the asshole Brian. Quite amusing change from the Bible Boy.