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Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/05 06:14 pm Title: Bitter Blackmail

awesome chapter. I have been away for far too long because I have a lot of catching up to do. I've always loved the story though. Anways, Brian is a stupid ass clown who needs to get counseling or better yet, locked up in the pshyc ward for testing on that sick brain of his. Howie's feelings for Ori are serious! And it sounds like she has a crush of her own on him! Alex is gonna make an awesome step-brother! Awesome job! I cant wait to read on!

Author's Response: Awe, you're back! I've missed you so much. Little late on the whole email thing, but I promise to get that back in gear! I've missed you! And, thanks for the prospective review of all the characters!

Reviewer: SweetAngelicAngel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/05 06:39 am Title: Bitter Blackmail

Good Lord, Brian has one nasty freakin' mouth. Someone needs to grab the bar of soap and wash that boy's mofo mouth out. But like I'm sure I've said before, the way the two of you are portraying him is rather refreshing. Definitely unique from the angelic bible boy everyone else percieves him to be in fics. Props to that. It makes his role in this much more interesting. But what the freakin' frickin' frackin' porch monkeys is stuck up his motha butthole? I think the word 'hate' is even a srong understatement when it comes to his feelings towards Oriana. Props to Homeboy for defending Oriana. Brian needs to pull his head out of his ass and face sunny side up to realize he's a major jackass for even having such feelings about Oriana in the first place. And Teagan...whoo...that girl would go ballistic I'm figuring if she ever found out what Brian said about Oriana. Damn the drama with that would good. But aside from that, Homeboy is such a darn hopeless romantic! The personal notes in the poem book were very touching. That aspect was done wonderfully and added the perfect touch to the chap. Awesome job and keep up the great work! [Alex]

Author's Response: Well, that's quite a long review! We love those! Of course, you're a sibling, so it's kind of cut in half because you're partial. But we still love you.

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/04 04:40 am Title: Bitter Blackmail

I'm really hating Brian with passion he need a realitic check. And I guess his butt kick again by Ori hehehe. I didn't like one bit the confratation that B the monter and Howie. I felt everything that Howie felt. darn you are good but now give me more than this don't be cruel I want more Howie + Ori plz atleast two chapter of them hehehe.

Author's Response: I think the aim of the game is to hate Brian. And I'm glad that you felt everything that Howie was feeling. Guess it makes our job a little easier. And we will deliver Ori and Howie, we promise. Thank you!

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/04 04:15 am Title: Bitter Blackmail

wow hehehe this fic is really getting good. Brian is such an asshole though! I love Alex and Oriana together lol....lepord print room with weird green carpet...*dies at image* So very Alex hehehe. Teagan though...how can she date Bri, I know he's cute but... anywho, hehe update soon! I love it and Ana you know I've always been a fan of your stuff, whether your collaborating or writing it solo. *Rose*

Author's Response: Rosie~Posie! I haven't spoken to you in forever. Would you at least drop me an email or something? Jezz, I miss you! And thanks for the review, Cocci and I appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying my stuff, even if it isn't bathed in blood like the regular mayhem. Of course, co-writing tends to be a bit more gentle *pets Cocci* *purrs* Thanks!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/04 03:12 am Title: Bitter Blackmail

LMAO!!! Alex & Ori are real characters together! *giggles* I'm SO glad they get along so well! *grns* Now, I NEVER thought I'd see the day I say this, but.....BRIAN'S A FLIPPIN' ASSHOLE!!!!! How DARE he threaten Howie & Ori like that!!!! How DARE he!!!! I hope Kevin finds out & gives Brian the lickin' of his life!!!! Yeesh! UPDATE!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: Ori and Alex are from the same mold, huh? You'll have plenty of more entertainment from them, trust me. And it's interesting to see characters protrayed in different ways. Brian couldn't always be the Bible-Boy forever, could he?

Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/04 03:02 am Title: Bitter Blackmail

Man alive! I'm enjoying this story. Although, that was about 20 too many f-words for my liking. Keep this up, I really need to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Man alive? Not sure I've heard that expression before. But totally do-able. And I know the swearing is a little much, but if you go into a high school scene or college scene for that matter, you're going to get a lot of cursing. It expresses the characters in ways 'by golly' and 'darn it' just don't cut. Sorry if it's too profain, but it's meant for a purpose.