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Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/05 06:56 pm Title: Superman

I hope that Teags sees Brian for the jerk-off he is. He has the wool pulled over her eyes. I hope Howie in his frantic state doesnt scare Oriana off. He really does care. It is so sweet! Another great chapter!!! I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Well, you've got some more chapters to go!

Reviewer: SweetAngelicAngel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/05 05:26 am Title: Superman

Oooooh! The kiddies are being naughty! Tsk tsk! Man, yeah, had a feeling things were going to get a bit steamy between the two of them soon. Now I'm just waiting for Homeboy and Oriana. Keep up the great work! [Alex]

Author's Response: Naughty... The story of our lives...

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/04 07:10 pm Title: Superman

I can what a jerk and I hope it would not pass from being only mennancing words no actual actions on what Brian said he was going to do to Ori. And I hope when Ori and Howie chat she can be his nurse and somehow she gets the heads up on his past as well as brian's plans. but I pty Aj he is in the middle of all of it. Whoa! I cannot wait for the other chapter I want more plz! hehehe.

Author's Response: Alex is definitely in the middle of the entire mess and you'll get more this weekend. Promise.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/04 06:25 am Title: Superman

Lmao! Teags & Brian are SO cute & SO funny together. It's such a shame that he's such an ass towards Ori. And also, I WISH Howie HAD listened to Alex! He's gonna scare the shit outta Ori, then lose her for good 'cause of stupidity & by letting what Brian said get to him - though it should, he does NOT have to go see Ori & share her senseless with his actions! Dammit Howie! LISTEN TO ALEX FOR ONCE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: Starry's quite proud to know that you find Teags and Brian to be quite cute together. They are a picture of perfection. And, you never know about Howie... Just have to wait for that next chapter I suppose...