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Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/05 05:55 pm Title: Interruptions

Brian sure is sweet to Teags, but a warlock to Oriana. I cant believe he didnt want Teagan to go to Ori when she was hurt...just cuz he hates her. ANd Teags ex is a psychotic nimrod. Hmm, sounds like Brian. Teagan needs to find a guy who is good all around! Oriana seems to be falling for Howie more than ever. Hopefully he wont disappoint her! Great job, UPDATE SOON!!!

Author's Response: UPDATE ALREADY HERE!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/05 05:46 am Title: Interruptions

Aww. Howie's SO sweet! Brian's still an asshole though - and Teagan's starting to piss me off now. Lol. UPDATE! ~Lenni~

Author's Response: Teagan's starting to piss you off? Wow, that's a change!

Reviewer: scarlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/05 03:40 am Title: Interruptions

whew. this story really got me hooked up and i've been really looking forward to updates. nice one, anastacia. i went for a vacation this weekend and i brought along this story with me thru Quickword so that i can read it anywhere using my mobile phone.it's amazing and during that long hours of travel, your story made me seize the moments and savor the good story. One thing that noticed me though is that your constant use of question mark(/) when it shouldn't be used. Well,sometimes i wondered if that's really a question for them or a statement after all. Well, aside from that, no big deal then.this one is a good story and i hope you'll get more people to hook up with this. :D

Author's Response: Like I told another reviewer, I can't hold all the credit for these chapters. I co-write with a very special person - Starry Eyes, so check out her stuff. She's freaking fantastic. But, I'm glad that you're so overly addicted to the story and we also hope that we get more readers as we progress! But, your comment about using the question mark somewhat confused us. I went back to look through the story and I don't know if you mean our actually question marks or the backslashes. Because, the backslahes (/) are purposeful. Whenever you see the backslash (/) it means that we're adding a lyric to the story. And when you're quoting a lyric or poem into a story, you use the backslash (/) to represent the different lines of the poem or story. Hopefully that makes sense and hopefully that's what you were speaking about.

Reviewer: AngelgirlDorough Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/05 01:15 am Title: Interruptions

thats is hell of a chapter gurl you have done a wonderful job, can i have more?

Author's Response: Can't take all the credit for the chapter. Starry Eyes is co-writer, so she takes half the credit. You should definitely check out her stuff. She's a fantastic writer. And, of course you can have more. This is one of the stories that's actually completed!